| "I missed you and now your back" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: Really Cute
Reviewed By: Dark Sanctuary [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2006 01:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really cute story. I think that this could be really great. Please continue.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2006 17:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really cute and kind of funny. The big bad Yami's trying to find the ones they love. Good chapter
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Reviewed By: Tenisha On: April 14, 2006 00:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
needs to really b continued and now dat u got 5 r u can make the nexts chappy but very well done if you ask me
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Reviewed By: lovely liz On: March 28, 2006 00:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i realy think u should continue the story its very interasting. and it was very clear that it was yugi if they didnt figer that out than they should get ther brain check hehe
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Reviewed By: Marikslover1606 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2006 19:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that is a very well written story. I only found one mistake. But that happens to all of us. I would give it a 100% if it were to be graded in a school. Will we be seeing any more of Malik?
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2006 13:24 CST
Comment/Review:
I definitely think you should continue this. It is really great. I think it was quite clear that it was Yugi. I will if I have to write several more reviews so that you will upload the next chapter. I love it.
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Reviewed By: Daisuke14 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2006 19:38 CST
Comment/Review:
ooooo... -is shaking at the thought of Yami coming back- love it, but please tell me that was like a prologue. and who was that anyway?
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