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| "Shun Shun Rikka Does the Math" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: time space thingie, lol
Reviewed By: wicked_liz On: October 04, 2007 18:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I suppose that my review may sound biased because of the high rating, but truthfully I like your writing style, you spelling and grammar were perfect (in my recollection), no one else has tackled writing a fic based on Inoue's hairpins. And the best part was that I was having a lousy day, pervasive melancholy; moodiness at my brand of cigs no longer being in production; an anxiety attack about one day having to be without my Mum - just a BAD day and found your stash of fiction here, and I really do love your Inoue, she's a champion for dreamy girls. You made me laugh and feel better. From someone whose bad day just significantly got better, THANK YOU. Witty comedy from 5 different personalities, all of which belong to the same person. Thinking about it, one can begin to understand why her healing flower seems to be the leader, why her aggressive/ offensive trait is singular - and the one she has the most trouble using. How you manage to salvage this character and make her so everything she's supposed to be in the midst of the snowjob that Kubo seems intent on, is just fantastic writing (and obvious love and deep understanding for this character). I'll stop the effusive gushing, in my defense I'm a hard-core fan of the Care Bears and Rainbow Brite, so cute girls are always love.
| Reviewed By: Rougue_Picaro On: June 08, 2006 21:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
"Two girls liking one boy." Lily drew a V in the air. "And then another boy likes one of those girls." She made a slashing gesture through the V. "In no way is that configuration a triangle," said Baigon. "I think you just drew the Big Dipper." - I think that part seriously killed me. First that beautiful, depressed mood and then the big dipper.. xD Guess faeries take after their owner. Wonderfull story, nicely written and fittingly in-character. Definitely going to my favourites. :)
| Reviewed By: Suki37 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2006 13:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked how you wrote and portrayed Orihime's feelings and insecurities thru her fiaries. It was a nice eye opener inside this girl. I know most of the fandom don't like Orihime, calling her 'giggly' and 'annoying bitch'. You know, I usually do not like her type of character too; the opposite bubbly kind who won't shut up. Lol But I dunno, I like Orihime's character [suprise suprise]. I think her character is different from the bubbly genre, there is a twist inside her somwhere. Like, she has her own share of painful past [it seems most of the main chracters in Bleach characters do. But despite all that, she is still able to walk around like a ditzy, bright radiating sun who has crazy theories involving aliens and zombies is just...warm to the heart. That's what I like about her; despite everything, she can still go on...unlike some other characters who built strong walls surrounding their heart and hesititate to show others their true self [eg. Ichigo]. In the manga, Rangiku said that Ichigo needs Rukia, but in a wah, I think he needs Orihime just as much. He needs happiness in his life, and I think she could give him just that. [Most of the time, her ditziness just makes me laugh so hard!] Anyway, it would be nice if you could do that; write about how Orihime could contribute to Ichigo's life, brigthening it. Just a suggestion;;; sorry for blabbling on and on about things that has nothing to do with your fic. It was very enjoyable though and I really like it. Hope you'd write more!
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