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| "Balance of Power" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] | | Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 › » ] | Reviewed By: Misa92 On: October 03, 2006 18:42 CDT
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*jumps around while in heaven* UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! yay!!!! lol, i'm glad to see you havent forgotten about this story!! yay! lol.
| Title: You are killing me
Reviewed By: SnowFlakeAlchemist [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2006 17:06 CDT
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Please, update soon! It has been so long and there are so few stories that are as well written as this is. I'm dying here!!!!! Please, begging you here update, for the love of all that is good in this world!!!
| Reviewed By: Misa92 On: September 20, 2006 23:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MUST UPDATE!!! *foams at the mouth, then starts choking, then dies* send the stories to heaven k? =]
| Title: I haven't reviewed this yet...wow.
Reviewed By: Child Xylia [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2006 23:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm eagerly awaiting Chapter 22, and I must tell you (since I haven't reviewed this before) how much I love the work you guys put into this story. This is one of my ultimate favourite Fullmetal Alchemist fanfics. I gotta mention how smart and funny it was to add in the "Hokey, so, this is the world, and we are definitely going ot blow ourselves up." It took me a while to figure out what the hell Heist (oh, and sneaky how you used one of your name's for a character =P) was talking about, but when I found out...Oh, genius! I can't wait until Ed breaks the news to Al about his son, which is one of the highlights of this fic. Well, there is too many amazing things to comment on in this story, so I'll just leave you with a "goodbye" and a plea to update soon. =P P.S. Oh, and I also MUST thank you for introducing me to Janis Joplin and Tina Turner. I absolutely LOVE Janis' work and "Proud Mary". Keep up your good work!
| Reviewed By: SparkieGoesHuzzah [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2006 02:41 CDT
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I've only read the first part of the first chapter and all I have to say is: Holy Chessersnitzels! Hughes is alive?! Praise Hojo! xD Now to go read the rest of the fanfic.
| Reviewed By: Haywire_Hakaze [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2006 19:51 CDT
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Kitten... *mourns her death* But I'm glad we got to see Roy's look-alike and I'm impressed with the coded speech. I humbly bow before your greatness and request more.
| Reviewed By: Moonshadow14 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2006 22:32 CDT
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And I thought that a crossover of 5 other stories would be confusing....but that's some imagination! Anyway, awesome new chapter and I hope you update soon. I'll try and give a more detailed review after I get some sleep, but keep up the insanely awesome fanfic!!!^^
| Reviewed By: Moonshadow14 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 15:48 CDT
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YAY!! A new chapter, well, okay, it's two, but I've been out of town for a while, so I just read them both at once, and I have to say that you have out-done yourself yet again!!!! You're an amazing writer! And the story-line keeps getting more and more complicated and interesting and AWESOME!!! Sorry about all the exclaimation points, but I'm really hyper right now and trying not to be, but I'm getting mixed results. And if you update within the next ten days, I'll read and review after the 3rd of July, because I'm going out of town tomorrow. Just telling you that so you won't think I died or abandoned the story or anything. But please keep writing!!! I love you!!!^^
| Reviewed By: Haywire_Hakaze [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2006 22:59 CDT
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You did not. Just. Kill. Kitten. You did not! I will have to smack you silly if you did. You know that, right? But I'm glad there was a chapter with HUGHES. That God of a man... *purrs* I actually met Sonny Strait, the voice of Hughes. Again, *purrrrr*. But now I'm going to skip all of the LUFF comments and move on to speculation and hopes. Is there going to be a confrontation between Amber and Bond? Can we see the flute guy (argh, damn his illusive name. It escapes me and I'm too lazy to backtrack) in an upcoming chapter and have more info about him? The kind of reminds me of a guardian angel or a shaman, or something. I dunno. Are we going to hear from the Shadows again? I'm craving more Hughes, too. Can't get enough of his yumminess. *lick lips* Heheh, but what do you expect from a hormonal fangirl? Anywho, this is still ABSOLUTELY FREAKING AMAZING and I still stand by my declaration of this being the unofficial sequel to the FMA movie. So... Yeah. You know what I'm hoping for but I'll be pleased with any turn this seductive labyrinth leads my frazzled brain. You've done fine without my suggestions so far, so it actually might be best if you didn't heed them. Especially if you've already laid out your flow-line. Your sequel, your decisions, ne?
| Title: Mwaaaaa~!
Reviewed By: Haywire_Hakaze [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2006 17:19 CDT
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Okay, I'm not one to put all the "hearts, stars, 'n' horseshoes" into a review, because fangirl-ism just doesn't suit me, but I DO love to leave words of LURVE and devotion. However, I cannot find the words to express it all... so I have been reduced to fangirl-ism for now. Ahem... OMG!!!
| Title: All Caught-up
Reviewed By: Haywire_Hakaze [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2006 11:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now that I've finally read all 17 chapters you've put out so far, I can safely say I'm completely IN LOVE with this fanfic. Your style is easy to follow, and I can definitely say this is as original as it gets without being off-the-wall. (Dare I say, I could actually see this as a FMA sequel! It's so on-target, it's scary!) My enjoyment factor is at an all-time high with this one. Excellent work; I'm looking forward to reading much, MUCH more from you.
| Reviewed By: Moonshadow14 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2006 20:27 CDT
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I AM FREE!!!!! YES!!!! AHHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! ... um, yeah. Much happiness today, 'cuz I'm off for the summer, passing all my classes with b's and a's, and can now devote my weekdays to reading and writing fanfics instead of studying for finals every waking minute. Ah yes, life is good. {but it would be much better if you updated soon! *hint hint* ;)} Well, that's just stuff with me. I don't know what grade you're in or when you have finals and get out for summer, but good luck with all your exams!! Hope you have an awesome summer, too, but I'll definatly be reviewing this summer, so this won't be the only time you hear (read) me say (write) that. Sayonara until you post again!!
| Reviewed By: Moonshadow14 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2006 20:16 CDT
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Holy CRAP!!!! Now you absloutly have to update soon or I wil go INSANE with suspense!!! (Can I be excused from finals for that? Wish I could be, though.) LOVE the new chapter!!!
| Reviewed By: Haywire_Hakaze [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2006 16:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I see no Mary-Sue yet, if at all, so that's a major plus. There are a few sentences fragments, but not so many as so send me into a twitching fever of "Does not compute! Does not compute!". This is a very interesting story and has definitely been added to my list of favorites. One major turn-on to it: Ed does not adapt immediately to his new surroundings like the super-genius we all want him to be. People-- even Amestrians-- have their sensory and informatory overloads and I like how you're keeping things realistic. I can tell research went into the ambulance ride; either that or you're with EMS. *shrug* Either way, you're doing an excellent job and I can't wait to read more.
| Reviewed By: Lordsesshomaru2 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2006 02:24 CDT
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Absolutly great. Please update soon.
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