| "Balance of Power" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] |
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Reviewed By: Moonshadow14 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2006 20:27 CDT
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I AM FREE!!!!! YES!!!! AHHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! ... um, yeah. Much happiness today, 'cuz I'm off for the summer, passing all my classes with b's and a's, and can now devote my weekdays to reading and writing fanfics instead of studying for finals every waking minute. Ah yes, life is good. {but it would be much better if you updated soon! *hint hint* ;)} Well, that's just stuff with me. I don't know what grade you're in or when you have finals and get out for summer, but good luck with all your exams!! Hope you have an awesome summer, too, but I'll definatly be reviewing this summer, so this won't be the only time you hear (read) me say (write) that. Sayonara until you post again!!
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Reviewed By: Moonshadow14 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2006 20:16 CDT
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Holy CRAP!!!! Now you absloutly have to update soon or I wil go INSANE with suspense!!! (Can I be excused from finals for that? Wish I could be, though.) LOVE the new chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: Haywire_Hakaze [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2006 16:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I see no Mary-Sue yet, if at all, so that's a major plus. There are a few sentences fragments, but not so many as so send me into a twitching fever of "Does not compute! Does not compute!". This is a very interesting story and has definitely been added to my list of favorites. One major turn-on to it: Ed does not adapt immediately to his new surroundings like the super-genius we all want him to be. People-- even Amestrians-- have their sensory and informatory overloads and I like how you're keeping things realistic. I can tell research went into the ambulance ride; either that or you're with EMS. *shrug* Either way, you're doing an excellent job and I can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: Lordsesshomaru2 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2006 02:24 CDT
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Absolutly great. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Moonshadow14 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2006 16:24 CDT
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YAY!!! AN UPDATE!!!!! And it is just as good as all the others, if not short and vague (like Ed ^^) Please please please please PLEASE update again soon!!! Still loving the story!!
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Reviewed By: Moonshadow14 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2006 20:43 CDT
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Did I spell caffine right? I can't really tell right now because I've already had to retype about half the letters because I keep hitting the wrong ones, but it is still the caffine's fault. all the caffine. and maybe the acorn, too, but mostly the caffine. And please update soon, because your fan fic is awesome and hilarity-ful. YAY SUGAR!!!!!!!!!! ^^:p
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Reviewed By: Moonshadow14 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2006 20:38 CDT
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Hi! Me again!! Guess what?!?! MY DOG HAS A PANCREAS!!!! YEAH!! (she's always had one, too. and... and... I think I have one too!!! AHHHHHHHH!!!) ... Ok, sorry, that was really random, but I completely and whole-heartedly blame the caffine. yep. it's aaaallll its fault. I swear. really, it is. OH YEAH! And update soon, please, too!!!!! Bye!!! ^^
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Title: Killing me!
Reviewed By: SnowFlakeAlchemist [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2006 12:05 CDT
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Please update soon! This is such a good story! And you are most decidedly killing me with suspence! Hurry and update!
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Reviewed By: Moonshadow14 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2006 20:25 CDT
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by the way, I've seen the episodes, and I know a little about the movie, but were Ed and Noah really a couple?? Just curious. wow... Ed's a daddy!! ^^
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Reviewed By: MooNshadow14 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2006 20:23 CDT
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BLOODY HELL!!! You can't just end an insanely awesome, really well-written fanfic with an actual plot and humor right THERE!!!! What is WRONG with you!?!?! Have you no heart?! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon or I will lose what little mind I have left! Please?
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Reviewed By: Shalome On: April 27, 2006 12:19 CDT
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I really love this story. Please continue :)
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Title: SnowFlakeAlchemist
Reviewed By: SnowFlakeAlchemist [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 17:31 CDT
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Wow this is such a great story, but poor Ed!!! Dachau was a horrible camp... Please update soon! I absolutly love how this is going so far!
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Reviewed By: Uniasus( lazy right now) On: April 19, 2006 13:14 CDT
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I love this story, just to let you know. I'm so sorry for Ed, ohmigod. But I also love how you have little bits of humor in here. The paintball fight was awesome.
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Reviewed By: Silver Sakura Petals On: March 28, 2006 21:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a great story. Please update it soon. I'm dying of suspence! WHat happens to Ed? Are Hughes and Rielly...? PLESE HURRY !!!!
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Reviewed By: dragonnan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2006 01:26 CST
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Before I get too far... YAY!!!! It's wonderful to see it posted here, awesome!!!!!!
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