Reviewed By: Tenshi of Hikari -not logged in On: June 19, 2006 10:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
^_^ I really like this!!! It's a really good one-shot. I like the way the you went into Ryuichi's thoughts toward the end the best. OH, and Shu and Yuki's date!! *sticks tongue out* *giggle* I would like to see this continued. ^_^ Could you add a few chapters or something. at least go a little farther with what Tat's and Ryu's relationship turns out in. And go with the thing where Ryu doesn't think that shine was for him and where he learns it is??? *on hands and knees asking for more, begging* of course, you don't have to if you don't want to. ^_^ I still like it!!
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