| "Two Worlds One Love" Reviews/Comments [ 94 ] |
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Reviewed By: Breezie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2007 02:37 CDT
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great story keep up the good work
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Title: tears
Reviewed By: babydragon213 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2007 05:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
beyond EXCELLENT!!!!!!! I finally read the last couple of chapters to your story. sorry it took me so long to update on my reviews,didnt want you thinking i wasnt interested in your story anymore. your story stands out so much because of your wonderful and vivid imagination. you have such emotion and love towards each chapter, i can feel it. and the details are extraordinary. please say you'll be writing another fanfiction story . you are such a wonderful writer. Blessings Babydragon
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Title: LOVED IT!!!
Reviewed By: aeternitas812 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2006 06:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome! I absoultely loved this fanfic. My bf kept getting irritated at me because I'd start reading it litterally every chance I got, lol. You did an awesome job. You keep all the of the characters in chartacter and make the story really believable. I couldn't tear myself away! Which in a way is almost bad, since I end up going to my morning class with zero sleep, lol. But I can't say it wasn't worth the lost hours of sleep! Loved it, and I encourage you to continue. You have really great talent that should not go on wasted! Absolutely terrific fic! (P.S. I only hope that you don't go the usual route writers do and crush us all with a sad or bittersweet ending, lol, there are too many of those in almost all the animes I've seen, which is alot, man it makes me want to scream every time, lol).
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2006 21:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww, this was, I think, a bitter-sweet chapter. I really liked it. I can see a conclusion around the corner, and I hope there's a happy ending. Then again, not everything inlife has one. But I know, whatever ending you come up with, it'll be great. And your right, your story doesn't have to consist of 40-something chapters to be great. Remember, it's the quality, not tha quantity that matters in the end. I can't wait for your next chapter. Awesome job, girl!!! ;-) I hope your doing good, too! :-)
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Reviewed By: underwater963 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2006 19:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wish it was longer but still great! ...and sad, please update soon.
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2006 21:26 CDT
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AAAAAH, what ya doin to a sista. Chapter was waayy to short. Please give it a happy ending, I hate sad endings. See ya nesxt chapter.
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2006 19:56 CDT
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oh gods this is heart breaking! Of all the bad decisions. kami I'm going to cry!
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Reviewed By: Rinlover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2006 19:07 CDT
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*strangles you* update soon!!! Great chappie, but you need to make it looooonnnnngggggeeeerrrr. Too short and painful.
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Reviewed By: Starblade2007 On: October 04, 2006 11:22 CDT
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OMG, this was a really good story! I just read it all in one day and...WOW! I can't wait for you to update it...*runs around room in excitement* ^_^
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Reviewed By: Bluesavorqueen [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2006 01:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
write more dammit i need to know what happens next. i enjoyed the chapter but hope the next one wont be sad. cant wait til it comes FYI.
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Reviewed By: Rinlover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2006 06:24 CDT
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*shakes finger at you* bad ending! Bad bad bad! Me no lieky you no more! Bad ending! *cries* I sound like a mother scolding her child...T.T...Hey, you should make Kagome get pregnant! Then Inuyasha CAN'T run away ^___^ That would be so pimped...
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Reviewed By: underwater963 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2006 18:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh no no no no! Please dont do that she has to stay with him!!!!!!!!!! Argh! Well, I enjoyed this chapter and even though I know the next one will most likely be sad, I cannot wait till it comes.
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2006 14:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey!!! It really has been a while, lol. This was a really good chapter. But the end revelation on Inu's part at the end was a little sad. But then again, without sadness or pain, there is no love and happiness. So, great job. I can tell the end is almost here. I know whatever you write up, will be wonderful. :-)I hope your doing good.
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2006 22:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh I can't tell you how much I enjoyed this. I often get frustrated because people have a hard time describing how painful it is to love someone, like Kagome does Inuyasha, and feel as if they don't return it. I thought you did a brilliant job developing both of the characters and were able to really convey strong emotions. It has been very heart wrenching. I loved the time that they spent with Sango, Miroku, and Shippou. It was nice to see that they all still cared for each other as a family. You also had wondeful, tasteful lemons, not trashy like some of the ones I have seen before. Overall, I think you're a great writer and you've done a brilliant job with this story and I look forward to seeing more updates in the future. Thanks bunches!
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Title: u crative genius u!
Reviewed By: babydragon213 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2006 21:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i havnt reviewed in a long time cause i been workin (full time shift eeeesh) its pretty hard for me to come to the library too when im so exhausted from work. but i really love reading ur story when i have time to kick back and relax. i find it like a soothing, relaxation thingy for both mind and soul. currently i been a little confused about inu's emotions towards kagome in ur latest chapter sweet ecstacy, hard reality. it seems like he's ....(super (cough**) horny) or something? it scares me to think that it goes on in his mind 24 / 7 heheh. but no doubt about it. im enjoying these chapters of yours. they are very interesting i must say. and i cannot wait for ur next chappie. sadly i want ot post my own story up and it would be an honour if u read it too cause u got lots of wonderful creativity in you that flows in waves..unlike me i dont really am not much of a writer. but i will try to write this one chpter up and see waht ppl think. it shall be called secrets. if u like u can read it. im not sure if ill post it next week or this.though. heheh but newasys no more about me. i love ur story and when it is over i shall cry and kill many trees because of the boxes ans boxes of tissues that i shall use for my tears and boogers...especially boogers (gigglez**) i hope ur creative mind shall invent another story for us readers to enjoy. i shall keep updated with ur next chappie and i hope it shows up soon.. mean while i shall go prepare my stock of boxes of tissues..hm? ...recycable or soft and quilty?
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