| "The Seven Deadly Sins" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: WOW!
Reviewed By: orange_ninja [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2006 16:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this one! It was really creative and funny! It makes perfect sense! Good job!
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Title: So awasom!
Reviewed By: Buffy_Minamoji On: April 07, 2006 10:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is because I'm Neji obbssesed: HE IS SOOOOOO NOT LIKE THAT!!!! Any way your story is awsom! I love how easly you showed how each of these characters mach the sin (all but Neji anyway) I would have thought like Sakura, Ino or Kakashi for lust, but Naruto makes since now. Was Sasuke easy to place? or was it a different character?
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Reviewed By: Oneesan no Miroku Houshi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2006 17:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
I've always though of Chouji for gluttony, but you opened my eyes with Orochimaru. Grand job on this. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Blanche On: April 02, 2006 22:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love how you wrote this story and the idea behind it. I just think its so cool. I haven't even dreamed of an idea like this so its a really original idea and its just creative. The chapters themselves are okay but they might be better if they were a bit longer. Overall, its very cool.
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