Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Princess_Lalaith [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2007 14:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not sure it is a good idea to have a Pursuer train Chrno's reincarnation (even if they don't yet know the child is, in effect, that, I don't think it will be that hard for a demon to come to such conclusions). Anyway, you're handling a lot of children right now, I think it would be easier if you had used only the Apostles as the good guys and Sins to opose them. And of course Rosette. But anyway, that's all up to you in the end. Now, to what really concerns me. When exactly are you planning to update? Because, I mean, according to what I saw, the last chapter was written almost a year ago! And I don't want this story to remain unfinished until forever! It's too good for that! Please! Tell me you will be updating soon! Or if not here tell me where I can read more of this fic, because I really want to. PLEASE!!!
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