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"Tsuki no Aika" Reviews/Comments [ 1 ]

Title: Tsuki no Aika
Reviewed By: raven1234123 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2006 13:29 CDT
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Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10

Comment/Review:
The only thing I can say is bad(ish) about this fic is that at the beginning of the 2nd chapter it was confusing how Touga seemed to be a different person from Inupapa. Maybe at the intro you could say Touga, the Inu no Taiosho You left a good end of chapter, I thought 'what will they do know?' and 'what about Izayoi?' I hate it when people start off interesting but then the story is really boring.

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