| "Mew's Revenge" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Title: OMG
Reviewed By: Jessiemushashi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2006 17:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This stry roxs like no other!!!! I sooooooo want Ash and Brock to die!!!! They always are the HERO!! I can't take it ^_^ Nice job on persueding the reader!!! It shows how much mew wants to kill Brock and etc. You still need work on quotion and a structure of a paragraph. LOL Its not like I am PERFECT or anything Ok?? Well I am saying it again (GOOD JOB)
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Reviewed By: ValleygirlPikachu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2006 21:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story it perked me up since I was in a bad mood! Roc on ValleygirlPikachu! I hate Brock too!
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