Reviewed By: KurataSayuri [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2006 00:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
...this was amazing to read, and I can see something like this happening. Too bad it didn't really happen in the game, like you wrote it out here, it was awesome to go through the chapters. I'm glad you finished it and as for the small holes in the story, I think we all can deal with a little of those compared to the over all story. It was great that you kept everyone in character, and even pulled more characters in without messing up the story. It was great. Thanks for writing it!
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