| "Himeno and how it really ended . . . ." Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: good
Reviewed By: Kei_is_my_knight_4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2006 14:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Arenja if u eva look at dis: okay. its my first fanfiction so cut me some slack! geez. and besides, i wrote it at 3:00 am in california (and i don't even live there!) and I had a little bit of inspiration. but expect another (better) story about kei soming soon.
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Reviewed By: Mannen_is_the_true_knight [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2006 15:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
btw...that was me (alyssa) who just gave the review below
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Title: i liked it
Reviewed By: Mannen_is_the_true_knight [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2006 15:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked it. i didnt love it, but i thought it was an interesting twist on the real story. It was very original.. hahaha i sounded just like a real reviewer (i think) no really rach i kno kei is ur favorite character...it was pretty good for ur first fanfic!! now im getting started on mine...u gotta read it! mannen_is_the_true_knight is my username lol
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Reviewed By: Arenja [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2006 19:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
Umm... kinda odd. I mean, Kei and Himeno? WTF IS WRONG WITH THAT (note: EVERYTHING!)?! I mean, SIRIOUSLY! I've read a lot of Fanfiction, and this is the only bad pairing that I've read so far!
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