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| "Awakening Feelings" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] | Reviewed By: envy hatake [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2008 18:33 CDT
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Very good. I love how Tyson argues about the nicknames, please continue this storry? It is really good.
| Title: I gonna cry!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: MrsJoey Wheeler [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2006 14:17 CDT
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How DARE you!!!!! U dont put in a cliff hanger if it's a love story!!!!!! It's hust not done that way!!!! EEEVVVIIILLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: yaoi-koi On: July 28, 2006 06:25 CDT
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You know that your pure evil right? Seriously, only someone of evil would leave dedicated reader's with a clif hanger like that with a story this good. Any way, great story, awsome way to portray the characters, I realy liked Tyson, you made it so that he isn't and extreamly hyperactive imamaturechild like in the anime. By the way, I'm sure that no one that had read this has figured out what aka-bay means, I mean, I dont speak pig lattan, no worry's , your secrets safe with me. I realy hope thats Rei is kissing Maxi and not Kai or Ty, if it isn't Max I will hunt u down and smuther u with your oun pillow in your sleep, J/K, or am I, ;P.long story shot, cant wait for the next chapter, keep up with the awsome writing, and remember what I said...........PILLOW!
| Reviewed By: yaoi-koi On: July 28, 2006 06:19 CDT
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You know that your pure evil right? Seriously, only someone of evil would leave dedicated reader's with a clif hanger like that with a story this good. Any way, great story, awsome way to portray the characters, I realy liked Tyson, you made it so that he isn't and extreamly hyperactive imamaturechild like in the anime. By the way, I'm sure that no one that had read this has figured out what aka-bay means, I mean, I dont speak pig lattan, no worry's , your secrets safe with me. I realy hope thats Rei is kissing Maxi and not Kai or Ty, if it isn't Max I will hunt u down and smuther u with your oun pillow in your sleep, J/K, or am I, ;P.long story shot, cant wait for the next chapter, keep up with the awsome writing, and remember what I said...........PILLOW!
| Reviewed By: silver_wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2006 00:38 CDT
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NOT A CLIFFY!! *tearz* update onegai~!^_^
| Reviewed By: nightangel15 not signed in On: May 09, 2006 11:12 CDT
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evil cliffies must be destroyed!!!!!!!!!! pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeezeeeeee eeeeeeeeee update soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: twister's revenge On: April 29, 2006 00:42 CDT
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YOU BLOODY BASTARD!!!!! that's so evil..... i hope you update soon!!
| Reviewed By: Nobodynow On: April 14, 2006 23:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Author. Must. Die. No evil cliffies!!! Love the story, love love love it. Can't wait for the next chapter. Kai is nicely portrayed, he's not too mushy but just the right amount relieving him of the hard assness he was at the very begining. Tyson seems reasonable enough. He's not like he is in the anime all hyped up and hot headed and immature but he's not mister angst either. Personally I want to know who sent the letters, it's not Gramps is it? I have the strange feeling it's either his Dad/brother or Hilary with her girly eyes having spotted what the poor boys were oblivious too. Wonder what aka-bay means, I mean it's not like I speak pig latin or anything! Okay that was a given. Funny how nobody, not even Rei in all his on-my-own-for-a-year wisdom could see it. But why did he call his crush a baka? Strange. I really hope Rei is kissing Maxie and not Kai (which is seems like he might) because Kai's on hold for Tyson and vise versa. I'm all reviewed out now, hard work now that I actually think about what I'm saying. Thank You. DK ;)
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