| "Thieving Fate" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: lol
Reviewed By: Bunniekimmm [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2006 19:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
I just cant spell on my computer haha x]
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Title: Grammar
Reviewed By: Bunniekimmm [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2006 19:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your grammar needs to be wrked on. Really o_O. Maybe try re-eading your work
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: Arenja-too-lazy-to-log-in On: May 14, 2006 19:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice. all tens. You did nice work and plese update soon! I REALLY like your story so far!
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