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Reviewed By: InuyashaChic [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2006 20:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great!! I can't wait for the next update... This is all a flashback right? I really want to read the next chapter!!! hurry and update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: bubbles-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2006 22:55 CDT
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Oh man, I keep coming back to this fic and reading it over and over again! It's too good to leave like this! Please update!!!!
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: April 25, 2006 09:51 CDT
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Finding this interesting story was a nice surprise for the day. I can't wait to see how it turns out. Thank you for sharing your work! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: bubbles-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2006 23:11 CDT
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Oh my freaking god!!! You have to keep going!!!!!!! I have to know what's going to happen! This is too good! You have me in suspense! Ack! I wanna knooowwww!!! This is so great! I was about to cry when Inuyasha came to Kagome injured. That was so sad! I can feel the passion between them. Please please PLEASE update!!!!
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Title: Love it!!
Reviewed By: inu hanyou nikkie On: April 18, 2006 12:10 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well.. What an improvement! Very, very good!! Awesome!! What a way you have with the scenes, the use of descriptions and a great understanding of the characters personalities. This a wonderful first story you are writing and you are definitely showing more signs of becoming a very talented writer. I loved the whole tong-tongue bit in chapter 4. I laughed quite a bit!! (after I had myself a nice little hentai moment about Inuyasha's tongue) Also with the removal of his hakama to see his other wounds. I can easily see Inuyasha being more slippery than a greased pig when it comes to him evading something that makes him nervous. So mature you have them captured as. And Kagome's response to Inuyasha in danger and wounded very true and very realistic. I felt it was a sweet touch that she kissed him to take away his pain and to help him. I really like the touch you have with Inuyasha's hanyou - human - youkai side(s) talking to each other in his mind. This is getting better every time I go back to it and read. I can't wait to see the next chapter! And what a cliffie you have left us with!1 I love it!! That is great!! Makes me all wriggly for more of the story. Please keep up the most wonderful work!! You Rock!!
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