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| "Twilight's Coming" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: Oh well...
Reviewed By: Azraels Wing [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2006 08:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not really a bad fic, but sadly severly lacking in originality. Frankly, the plot has too many familiar aspects from few older fics for my liking. To point a few, Ranma being stolen child of Tokimi (Path of Chaos, Lord Rance) and Ranma becoming goddess and having that particular weapon (Oh My Ranma ½!, Ozzallos). Also, the grammar (formatting and paragraphs in this case) could use some polishing. In overall, promising fic which could be very interesting if it only could find its own 'self', so to speak...
| Title: Oh well...
Reviewed By: Azraels Wing [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2006 08:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not really a bad fic, but sadly severly lacking in originality. Frankly, the plot has too many familiar aspects from few older fics for my liking. To point a few, Ranma being stolen child of Tokimi (Path of Chaos, Lord Rance) and Ranma becoming goddess and having that particular weapon (Oh My Ranma ½!, Ozzallos). Also, the grammar (formatting and paragraphs in this case) could use some polishing. In overall, promising fic which could be very interesting if it only could find its own 'self', so to speak...
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