| "A Brother's Love" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Title: MORE!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: musicianofdarkness! On: June 03, 2007 23:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Go Incest! Yay me! Please update more soon! I reeeeeeeeally love incest! Well, if you don't update soon I'll curse you for all eternity! Ja ne! (See ya!)
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Reviewed By: Tjay Motou [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2006 19:32 CST
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Ah, You need to write more... much more... and boost the rating up to X if you know what I mean *wink**wink* Have a good one.
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Title: Wow.
Reviewed By: SweetHikari On: August 24, 2006 17:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is so beautiful! it's brilliant and I would LOVE if you wrote more soon! :D
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Reviewed By: sglily [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2006 21:02 CDT
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Incest is one of those things that is just so, so wrong; however, when it is written with the correct characters in mind, and written well, it is so, so right. Bakura and Ryou are a yummy couple no matter how they are written (well, when Ryou isn't getting the crap beat out of him and being subjected to rape) and they practically scream incest. I really have enjoyed your story thus far. Ryou is typically innocent and almost like a frantic puppy or kitten looking for affection. Bakura is the badass big brother who has behaved remarkably well considering the turn in the type of relationship he is now engaged in with his younger brother. I love the nickname Bakura has for Ryou - Ry Baby. Very cute and it doesn't seem to bother the younger one. Very nicely done! Look forward to more...
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Reviewed By: kokosada [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 10:55 CDT
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Heh, nice chappy!^^ Keep going.
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Reviewed By: Shadow Mistress [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2006 00:19 CDT
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Oops, forgot something. Happy B-day! ^^ *gives plushies of your fav chars* ^^
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Reviewed By: Shadow Mistress [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2006 00:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*giggles like a little school girl* I love this! I don't know what's with me and incestuous Bakura/Ryou fics; they always seem to draw me in, so intriguing, but then again, there aren't that much incestuous fics about them so that's the pleasure I guess, the rarity. That and I love Bakura/Ryou in most situations, when it's well written of course, hehehe. ^^ I love how Bakura stands up for Ryou, stupid ass father. :P Kawaiiness is so awesome. *huggles Ryou-kun and Bakura-sama* As for ideas, I don't have too much either. Seeing that it's drama, I say go for some angst too, if you want. Maybe you can have more incidents where they 'bond' and then someone finds out? And more trouble starts? I don't know...I'm not very helpful, I'm sorry. But when you can, please do write more soon, because I'm looking forward to the next installment. Til then. ^_~
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Title: I Knew It Wasent a One-shot
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: May 25, 2006 10:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I knew this couldent be a one-shot *smirk* Its way to good for that ^^ Unhealthy food made me hungry though.... ^^' Please update again soon!!!!!! XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX
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Title: whoot!
Reviewed By: fullmetalguitar (nli) On: May 24, 2006 23:28 CDT
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Ha! Flamed for writing incest?? Here?? *lol* As if. The only thing hotter than incest is twincest.. which you basically are writing, I mean, they look so alike! I adore this, you show how the react differently to their dad being gone and back, and of course I think we've all done the ice cream bit. ^___^ Bakura's all lustful and Ryou's all cuuuute.. ^___^ I love it. Also, happy B-day in advance! I get out of school on that same day, so I'm telling the truth when I say that I'll be uber-happy! For you and me! ^~^
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Reviewed By: kokosada [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2006 14:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
Write more! Nuff said.
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Title: This cant be a one shot!!!!
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: April 26, 2006 18:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cant be a oneshot!!!! I unsatisfied!!!1 ><
j/k I like this fic very much, you stoped right when it was getting interesting lol! Till/if you update ^^' XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX XXXXXXXX
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Reviewed By: IceAngel's Hikari On: April 23, 2006 23:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it please keep going and update very soon!!!!
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