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"When Choas meet Mischeif" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ]
 Reviewed By: Mr. Allen  On: March 15, 2003 23:51 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
its ok.
 Reviewed By: Mazoku  On: July 19, 2002 00:53 CDT
Rating(s):
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Comment/Review:
Since you don't have any proofreaders, you should at least spell and grammar check your work.
 Reviewed By: Dusk108 [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 01, 2002 23:17 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10
Comment/Review:
Story seems pretty good and fairly original. It really, really needs proof reading though. I get the impression that english is not your first language. Many of the errors were past and present tenses and other things teachers are always nagging about. You really need a pre-reader for this story.
 Reviewed By: C. Rose  On: March 26, 2002 22:57 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is very good and I only noticed one thing wrong with the whole thing. You have a lot of grammar errors. You need to go through from the beginning and read the story, you have a lot of odd words or extra letters that make reading this confusing. They are spelled right, but their placement is a bit odd or the extra letters make things even odder.
 Reviewed By: Eathlinn [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 17, 2002 17:41 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Nice story, but sometimes bit confusing, maybe bit more explaining would have been nice, that even dump readers like me do well:) But overall I liked the story and way characters have been mixed on it. If u write more, I want to read it.^^
 Reviewed By: Cyber Angel [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 17, 2002 05:28 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Well this is diffrent from all the other OMG/Ranma crossover and she does not seem to be to bad after what was done to her though that could be just be trying to put a good slant on things.

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