| Reviewed By: Coffee Gyrl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 01:19 CDT|
Style of Writing: 10 of 10Comment/Review:
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Sorry I missed this story for so long, I usually just filter the y-x stories right away and see if anything is new. I'm glad I checked under your author's name and found you had written something new. This was a GREAT kiss, and a very sweet, well rounded short fic. I really liked it, most people have a hard time getting these two together in a somewhat realistic fashion but you did a wonderful job. I adore everything you write and this was no exception. I like the expanded vocab on hair and eye colors, the coloring is one of my favorite things on the anime but can become bland to write, you did a good job. I really like how you capture their characters and would love to see more. You are an excelent word smith and I love your work.