| "Summer Wishes" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Picky person XD On: June 25, 2007 23:48 CDT
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I liked the story but Yuko's price isn't right. If she where to take TOhru's life she would pay a price as well. Her memories would have been a better choice. It has been stated many times in the manga that Yuko will not take anyones soul or life for she would have to pay a price. I belive that a curse like the sohma's would not pay such a heavy price. She transfported Sakura and the others from Tsubasa and she only requested Syarons most precious memories from Sakura and vice versa. And sending people trhough dimentions was supposed to be the hardest task... Other than that is was a good fic
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Reviewed By: Koniko-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2006 23:03 CST
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sorry it was supose to be a smilly face :) no sad faces :( X :) hehe sorrys!
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Reviewed By: Koniko-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2006 23:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved how you easily connected the two storys :( great job is there more? ^^
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Title: Summer Wishes
Reviewed By: Nessa Lynn On: November 25, 2006 08:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice story.I like it a lot.PLEASE update soon.
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Reviewed By: Ox King On: August 18, 2006 03:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh crap. Thats a heavy first chapter. I like Fruit Basket, so its going to be interesting what you write next. New chapter soon yes?
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Reviewed By: vamp686 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2006 17:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think the storie is really good! Everyone seemed to be in character and the plot is grand! Keep it up:)
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