| "Give Me My Wings" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Title: so .... Kawaii!!
Reviewed By: snowdeep On: July 01, 2007 17:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So beautiful so much emotion went though your writeing toword the end i almost cryed that was a tough desison for Sakura her home or her love for Syaoran wow i probably couldn't make that choice it wouldn't be easy at all good fanfic keep it up ^.^
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Reviewed By: Sakura~~~ On: May 23, 2007 10:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
So cute and original~!!
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Reviewed By: silverfeather [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2006 20:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are so creative to think of something like that! You know, they should make that the actual ending!!
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Reviewed By: Vandreador [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2006 03:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
if u update, please e-mail me.
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Reviewed By: Vandreador [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2006 03:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i want to know what is syaoran's reaction when he knows what sakure had done!!! So please update.
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Title: FFRG
Reviewed By: staindgrey [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2006 11:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
"Give Me My Wings" was a cute title to say the least, and as I began to read it I was wondering if you would use this 'cute' theme as a powerful writing tool or turn your story into a fluff that would make me want to gag. In the end, the first part proved to be true. I like your use of flashbacks placed throughout the story as opposed to one huge flashback; it takes the reader along on two different storylines that eventually collide at the end. Well done. Also, your characterizastion was great, as I found myself almost in tears over what Sakura and Syaoran were putting themselves through for each other's sake. I also have to say that the sweet little peck at the end, as opposed to a makeout scene, was very well-fitting to the story. Just like the fic, it was short, but held so much meaning. I really liked the story and look forward to reading other things from you.
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Title: wtf
Reviewed By: Lunar_Storm [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 19:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
you cant just stop it at that I WANT TO KNOW HOW HE FEELS WHEN SHE REMEMBERS I WANNA KNOW =( but it was good anyway xD
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Reviewed By: sistersofchaos [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2006 17:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A really enjoyable fic ^^ Light and fluffy, but able to show Sakura and Syaoran's true self. I'm impressed, thanks for posting!
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Title: FFRG
Reviewed By: Dee-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2006 12:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
There weren't any spelling or grammatical errors that I could remember, and this was an enjoyable one-shot, very cute, very fluffy and feel-good. The perfect Sunday afternoon read. I especially enjoyed how the story was told piecemeal, alternating between Sakura's bargain with the witch and with her work with the last feather. Good job and thank you for submitting to FFRG!
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