| "The Truth of The Forgotten Alchemist" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: Love iT!
Reviewed By: Kagome_HHH [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2006 11:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz update soon and make longer chpters plz!
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Title: KAWAII!
Reviewed By: kakashifangirl_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 05:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*falls over laughing* Oh, man! That's just too CUTE!!! Ed's name is kinda' cute, huh? Plese, write more, it's a very cute story!
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Reviewed By: Moonshadow14 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2006 17:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
Cool!!! I can't wait to find out how Ashley and Ed will get along once they get to know each other, so please update soon!!
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Title: Just to point out
Reviewed By: Duette-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2006 21:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I had to open a word document to view all the little bits that run off the page and i was Bold NOT Bold happy about that, but it is a nice start and I look forward to reading more, just fix up the story so you can actually read it in the explorer document.
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Title: grr
Reviewed By: dark_demon_princess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2006 07:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
coolio
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