| "Fundraisers Kill Me" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: menacing-shadows [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2006 13:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked it and I would probably enjoy a sequel.
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Title: fundraisers
Reviewed By: nikkie23534 On: May 10, 2006 22:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was great. It was so cute! It reminds me of myself when I had to sell candy for school as a kid. Now, Rin is like my own kids and nephews selling candy for school. I had to buy half of what they sold as well. (Skittles are the bomb!~especially the sour ones!^_~)
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Reviewed By: Child Of The Millennium [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2006 12:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was adorable. Now I crave candy.... O.O Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: I'm me, who are you? On: April 30, 2006 21:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES! please do another one, this was great! keep up the good work! *hugs*
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Reviewed By: star555555528(not signed in) On: April 29, 2006 14:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
Do i ever log on my name??? no ok well i like this alot. i was very much in the mood 4 skittles after reading this so i made my dad bring me home some. :) ok well write.
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Title: Awwww
Reviewed By: QueenLilSis [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2006 12:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so cute! I want some Skittles now ^_^;; There were a few places that didn't quite make sense when reading, but those are easily fixable and don't detract from the story, so I wouldn't worry about it, I just love to point these things out :P Otherwise, it flowed really well, and if you could expand and make an actual ongoing plot out of it, I'd love to read more. I love your style of writing it's very easy to read and I never get bored. Keep it up!
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