| "20Ryo" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: dissapointed
Reviewed By: narusaku4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2006 04:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmm looks like u didnt keep this going i thought i was really good you should come back to this somthime or i hope you will =)
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Reviewed By: TheTornRaven [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2006 16:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
Quite an interesting bit. Naruto seems to be just as he always is, and Sakura is within character considering what she has gone through. I would be very happy if you continued this story, as it shows great promise.
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Reviewed By: demon_wind_shuriken_no_jitsu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2006 12:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey!!! awesome story. keep writing!!! i really liked this. i think this has alot of potential, so i would love to see this fanfic continued. i dont think that sakura was THAT bithcy, but like you said, she worked in a brothel for 4 years. its understanible. i can harkly live next to my perverted neighbors. whenever we go out to eat or something, they are all like"wow, alex, when did you get so hott?" it bugs the crap outta me, like any girl. so sakura's atitude is perfect.
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Reviewed By: DemonChild656 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2006 18:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
kool story keep writing
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