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"JJ's adventures" Reviews/Comments [ 1 ]
 Title: Sadly dissappointed
Reviewed By: Tusuke Kounami  On: March 14, 2007 10:42 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10
Comment/Review:
The concept of this fic was absolutely beautiul and I couldn't wait to read it. But I was sad;y dissappointed when everything started to jumble together and you just left us write there. I really wouldn't call that a cliffy. You basically left ur readers hanging. Please consider rewriting this and further detailing it so that I may review your new one. This is not a flame, just some constructive critisism. I did like the over all idea of the fic.

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