| "the ceremony of sealing" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Guardian of Choas [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2007 00:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great story. Have you Abandoned this fic?????/
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Title: whoa wow
Reviewed By: spookagirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2006 13:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
THAT IS SO KEWL. I LIKE HOW U KEPT NARUTO'S FATHER ALIVE
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Reviewed By: Anaki Of The Blood Wolves [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2006 22:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
you know, just thought i'd point it out, the 1st and 3rd chapters are the same! but otherwise this rocks so update soon!
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Reviewed By: hyugagirl09 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2006 18:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was so aweome i didnt really like keoko dying was there a reason for that. is naruto going to be treated really well cause he is the hokages son or is everyone going to be two faced. if you continue you will be one of my favorite fan fics. i would like a naruto hinata fic. and maybe sasuke/tenten shika/ino and neji/sakura
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Title: Sweet
Reviewed By: Zendura [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2006 23:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sweet, i hope you continue this fabulos idea. Bigfoots suggestion has a lot of merit to it, but i'd love to see shino get some lovin (Naru/Hina Saku/Shino are my fav). i'm also wondering if your gonna give naruto body flicker because in the show he gets his fathers other signiture tech the resengan. (Total believer of Naruto being the 4'ths son) Cant wait for your next chap p.s. if u continue u might hit my top 5 fan fics list
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Title: Suggestions
Reviewed By: A_bigfoot37 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2006 22:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would like a Naruto/Hinata pairing if that's okay with you. Anyway you should separate out each paragraph with at least one extra space to make it easier to read. And another thing I suggest you do is use the Japanese way of saying the name where the last name is said first. If it were actually said like that in the original untranslated version then I wouldn't complain. A few more pairings I would like are: Sasu/Saku, Shika/Ino, or Shika/Tema, and Neji/Ten. Anyway these are only suggestions.
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