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| "Kagome's Memories" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] | | Pages (2): [ 1 2 › » ] | Reviewed By: Sailor Light Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2007 21:14 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! continue the story PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
| Title: Kagome's Memories
Reviewed By: Holloweenhigh2 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2007 21:40 CST
Comment/Review:
I just so happen to have the same title for my fanfic although it is completely different because Kagome in my story is a ninja with amnesia
| Title: Keep up
Reviewed By: Sorrows Angel Light [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2006 16:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep up the good work...Focus on who Kagome's goingt to be with..if she's going tobe with anybody. I raelly like it so update really soon!
| Title: Kagomes Memories
Reviewed By: Jonessa Salas On: August 04, 2006 03:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE YOUR STORY ITS SO COOL AND CREATIVE,KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.
| Reviewed By: shikigami2002 On: July 31, 2006 20:26 CDT
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Thank you for continuing, spelling eck, even if it is postponed, I know how that is. Oh Xaio again.
| Title: cool
Reviewed By: Spookygirl13 On: July 17, 2006 00:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
hi i hope you update soon. i really like this story. i reaaly hope to read more soon.
| Title: Xaio again
Reviewed By: shikigami2002 On: July 16, 2006 22:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sorry I'm just too lazy, and it takes forever to log in, and then to find the story, when I just get zapped to my e-mail and then read it. Naruto fics, did I spell that right,uh? Hmm, never seen the anime so they probably wouldn't make much sense to me. Kagome and Sora talking it out, that's good sometimes people just need to talk it out. Sora, don't kill Donald, you wouldn't like roast duck. Umm, this is a long review, but this story is so good, and even if the chapters are short, sometimes you just got to put in short chapters, just to let people know your still continuing the story. Inuyasha better watch out, he's going to need all the help he can get to stop Sora from killing him. Anyways long review, but great story, I can't wait for the next chapter. Oh and one more thing I wasn't impling that you were a pervert, just Yuffie, I hope I didn't offend you. See you next chapter.
| Title: cool now update
Reviewed By: spookygirl13 On: July 11, 2006 14:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
i like this story. i am also known as spookagirl i just am to lazy to log in rite now. i hope you update soon.
| Reviewed By: shikigami2002 On: July 09, 2006 15:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
Okay actually its Xaio, but I didn't want to go through the whole signing in and then finding the story,so I'm being lazy. Kagome, you are doing fine, for losing almost everything. And about Yuffie, clean your mind, dear. Oh the shikigami thingy is from a Inuyasha video game, really cool. Enough rambling, great story, please continue, has I will continue to read.
| Reviewed By: Reckard On: July 03, 2006 02:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
oops..sorry it doule posted..didn't see the first one..hehe. and myy suggestion for the pairings. VERY un-original and un-insprired. MAke some Diversity man! Oh well. Older ShippouxKairi would be cool^^
| Title: Forgetless Alchemic
Reviewed By: Reckard On: July 03, 2006 02:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hm. Its very intresting of a story, but you've just barely scratched the suraface so far. Your moving on WAAAAY too far with theese things. I mean, there are already so mny details you've missed that could help beefen up a chapter,by getting to a main plot, but not cramming several. Lets take chapter 2 for example. inuyasha just told Kagome that the Jewl was so important to him, he would KILL her for it. This is after DOZENS of life-and-death experienmces, love, tragic misfit things. Inu was going to set ASIDE ALL THE LOVE AND HAPPINESS he showwed for her, and throw it all away for a Jewl to become immortal or whatever. You just had her go and cry a little bit, then suddenly her mother reveals shes an orphan!? I was like 'WTF!?'. Thats way too fast. You should describe the tragic feeling of that happening to you. The slight bit of hapiness for the dissapearence of Naraku? The angst and sad-ness of ever seeing inu again. The feeling of regret she feels about the rest of her friends. Were they lying too? So many things. And even when you showed her leaving the shrine to ta go to the park, you could've put in the deeply immotional tension of seeing the well, and her friends, for the last time, seding her running. Escaping from the tragic deal opf fate life has doused her with. Include all THAT, and a hopefully more uniqe storyline(Kagome learns about her past as an ilander and helps SOra. and co stop some huge plot? Puh-lease), and some more descriptive words(such as 'lush and illustrious' other than, 'nice and cool'), then I could even just consider rating this umong the 10s. Shame on all you immeadite Perfection raters. Yah, i'm a first time writing fan-fic too, and I hope that might show you some of the little flaws, and ecceding plot lines that could form. I know I would would like ta hear some,(since none at my forum even looks). Anyway, I hope you can make this an awesome fic. I'll be followin it.
| Title: Forgetless Alchemic
Reviewed By: Reckard On: July 03, 2006 02:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hm. Its very intresting of a story, but you've just barely scratched the suraface so far. Your moving on WAAAAY too far with theese things. I mean, there are already so mny details you've missed that could help beefen up a chapter,by getting to a main plot, but not cramming several. Lets take chapter 2 for example. inuyasha just told Kagome that the Jewl was so important to him, he would KILL her for it. This is after DOZENS of life-and-death experienmces, love, tragic misfit things. Inu was going to set ASIDE ALL THE LOVE AND HAPPINESS he showwed for her, and throw it all away for a Jewl to become immortal or whatever. You just had her go and cry a little bit, then suddenly her mother reveals shes an orphan!? I was like 'WTF!?'. Thats way too fast. You should describe the tragic feeling of that happening to you. The slight bit of hapiness for the dissapearence of Naraku? The angst and sad-ness of ever seeing inu again. The feeling of regret she feels about the rest of her friends. Were they lying too? So many things. And even when you showed her leaving the shrine to ta go to the park, you could've put in the deeply immotional tension of seeing the well, and her friends, for the last time, seding her running. Escaping from the tragic deal opf fate life has doused her with. Include all THAT, and a hopefully more uniqe storyline(Kagome learns about her past as an ilander and helps SOra. and co stop some huge plot? Puh-lease), and some more descriptive words(such as 'lush and illustrious' other than, 'nice and cool'), then I could even just consider rating this umong the 10s. Shame on all you immeadite Perfection raters. Yah, i'm a first time writing fan-fic too, and I hope that might show you some of the little flaws, and ecceding plot lines that could form. I know I would would like ta hear some,(since none at my forum even looks
| Title: Cool new powers
Reviewed By: Xaio Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2006 19:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really really like this story. I especially like the Naraku parts, I'm a big fan of the bad guys too, he he. Go Kagome you rock! Uh, anyways please write more.
| Title: update.
Reviewed By: spookagirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2006 11:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
you should update. i like this story. it's really kewll.
| Reviewed By: Xaio Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2006 15:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well its good, but I'm confused, you might want to put up line breaks. Keep going, and I know how writers block can be.
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