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Title: Please continue!
Reviewed By: Kitsune0206 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2008 14:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue! It's very good so far.
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Reviewed By: animerules_animespiral On: November 22, 2007 02:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
why havent you put all this on animespiral? i know part of it is and i want an update on this its not fair that you leave a cliff everytime almost.:( i want to read more. by the way the lemons are good but still have room for improvement. My spelling is propable wrong in hear so sorry. thats y i dont write i read
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2007 18:35 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow... it looks like my reviews comsume the page...
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Reviewed By: Methos [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2007 22:20 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay everything was great, I couldn't stop reading. But you left us hanging. Like did it work is she awake, and what about Hiei, whats wrong with him? I can't wait to read what happens next and you answer all these questions!!
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 19:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
Waiting happens... I"ve seen worse--> one author only updated about once a year...
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Reviewed By: ChaoticAngelofElvenBlood [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 00:48 CDT
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Hey nice story. i like the idea of Kurama having a friend that had more secrets than him. It's a pretty original story ya got here. Yhe lemon was good. Hiei being nervous was a real kicker. I like how you write Hiei's character. It's a good story keep up the good work. Also I read your story on fanfiction.net too.
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2007 20:11 CDT
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HAha. ^_^ I still find it so amusing that you alwaus use the term "Sexual Intercourse"..ahaha
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2007 17:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow... I have update posts four in a row..haha^_^
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2007 09:04 CDT
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Yay for reading fanfics when I should be at school^_^
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2007 14:55 CDT
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Yay for being special~! haah^_^ and sure, add a lemon for the hell of it^_^ Maybe it'll draw in some new people..
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2007 18:18 CDT
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If you have up to those chapters written then you must surely want to torture us.. *T_T*
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2007 20:36 CST
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yay^_^ UPDATE ONEGAI~!!!
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