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"Her Own Little World" Reviews/Comments [ 28 ]
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 Reviewed By: best ever in the world!  On: March 13, 2008 23:20 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
omg it rockz its so awesome it rock i love it please keep writing and heheh i dont want to sound perverted but may i suggest more lemons^^ so awesom my faveorite fan ficion so far!=)
 Reviewed By: Volunteer11  On: July 21, 2007 23:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
Applause. Clap. Clap. Clap. My comment: I like. My suggestion: Reread the past 26 comments, then go make a sandwich. Then write away! (please)
 Title: update!!
Reviewed By: cherriichan [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 17, 2007 01:01 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I gave you all 10s...SO PLEASE UPDATE!!! i'm the 26th review, how many do you want before you will update??? ;-; please, or else i'll DIE! it's soooo amazing, i have favorited it and i'm waiting for the little email that says you updated. i'm waiting desperately. don't let your fans down! -- lots of love, cherriichan
 Title: T^T
Reviewed By: Ray-chan [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 28, 2007 16:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
You need to update Project-Chaaaaaan, the anitcipation kills me whenever I think about it! ;___; When you update your biggest fan will reward you with e-glomps and reviews. ^-^
 Title: MORE!!! ((please))
Reviewed By: Hyuuga Aki  On: May 15, 2007 07:46 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
ummm, excuse me but i realy enjoyed the story so far, is there any more? if not im gonna make my own!!! I loooved it but now its over and i need mooore... T-T Please, please,PLEAAAASSSE!!! make more...
 Title: Write more
Reviewed By: Pp  On: December 19, 2006 14:24 CST
Comment/Review:
hey you need to write more!!
 Title: -strangles-
Reviewed By: Ray-chan [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 02, 2006 18:59 CST
Comment/Review:
Update! T^T LOVE.THIS.STORY.SO.MUCH! UPDATE UPDATE!! WOO FINAL CHAPTER! ONE TO GO! YOU CAN DO IT! >W
 Title: UPDATE
Reviewed By: Ray-chan [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 01, 2006 01:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
UPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPD ATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATE UPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPD ATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATE UPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPD ATEUPDATEUPDATE!!! >W< Your on your last chapter, now you need to update just ONE MORE TIME. -crys at the thought of tis story ending-
 Reviewed By: kakashi&nejifan101  On: September 13, 2006 20:57 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
i really loved it,please make another chapter!!
 Title: T_T
Reviewed By: Ray-chan [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 10, 2006 17:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
When are you gonna update? I'm getting so anxious! xD I can't wait for the last chapter! Keep your writing going!
 Reviewed By: perfect little girl [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 26, 2006 21:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
this las chapter ws so good!! i can't wait to see what happens next with Hinata and Neji. update soon!!!!
 Title: Best FanFic i've read so far
Reviewed By: elfgirl427 [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 24, 2006 18:49 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
omg....where 2 start....first of all, this story is great.....i dun think i've read any naruto fanfic thatz this good....the couples Neji& Hinata r so cute 2gether......my fav couple....i hope u plan write more of this couple.....cuz i've not read much of Neji & Hinata......i guess that the fast is that their cuzins.....overall i rate this stroy over 10......15 is wat should be the rate....can't wait 4 ur next chapter....plz post it soon.....i hate waiting....lol....
 Title: Cliff Hanger!!
Reviewed By: Ray-chan [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 23, 2006 21:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
The council is so MEAN! I hope to read your next chapter soon. ^w^
 Reviewed By: sahjdude  On: August 16, 2006 23:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
ok.... in her own world... where shud i start? can't remember any1's name so pardon me... Hia wats her name d older sis Hinata and wats his name...Neji make a cute couple n i feel sorry for them cuz of hiashi's decision :-( (by the way y do all a dem have to b h's?)... so anyways i want a lil sis like hanabi.. an excellent accomplice... but i dunno where i'm gonna get a tenten from! I think the story was excellently pieced together except where hi.... wats her name again?....Hinata gets all smart n beats d heck out of Neji.. almost felt sorry for the poor guy. You really capture the innocence of love where Neji and Hinata are concerned bcuz i cudn help but hit myself on the head when i read how childish Hinata behaves when around Neji and how Neji so easily gives in to her.... (d doing of the hair and the dancing in the rain)...So cute but every relationship has its problems and oh ma gosh i can't believe Hi... wats his name? hinashi?.... no... hiashi is tying to separate them... mayb he shud spy on them with his bathoy.... ah not gonna bother trying to remember how that one's spelt and then he'd see how innocent their love really is. Ps can i have the recipe for hinata's delicious dumplings? :-) But anyways.... abck to the review.... I enjoyed every moment of it and i can say that for all your stories so far... Keep up the good work n hurry up and finish this story!!!!! grrr and work on ADD too, ok? ;-)
 Title: Don't stop!
Reviewed By: Ray-chan [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 09, 2006 13:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
I LOVE this story! And if you quit, I will have to hate you, I am very sorry. Actually.... No I won't.... Just pleasecontinue! Please, please, please?!
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