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| "The Other Half" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Inuyasha_SIT [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2008 04:22 CDT
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Story = good, killing puppies = awful!!! I'm really sad to see that you haven't updated in sooooooo looooonnnggggggg!!!!! You shouldn't care so much about the reviews as you do with sharing what you've created with anyone who might enjoy it.
| Title: holic
Reviewed By: Atara [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2007 21:54 CDT
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this fic was quite enjoyable to read! i'm sorry to see that you haven't written anymore, and i agree it's a really small readership because the anime isn't mainstream like naruto or something. but still, your characterization of doumeki and watanuki are spot on, if not exactly like the anime. i admire your wish to not "taint" your cute characters. but i definitely like the tension between them. although i would say that watanuki is hella annoying after a while. that's just my opinion, for some reason in the anime his little outbursts aren't that annoying, perhaps because they happen less often? of course i would like to see what happens with that bracelet! how exciting! i wonder what yuuko has in store for the two boys! well, i hope you keep writing. please don't get discouraged by not having reviews! write for the enjoyment of telling a story you love, regardless of how many read. maybe ppl aren't reviewing because they're not members...but please write more!
| Title: The Other Half
Reviewed By: vampslyr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2006 20:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, chapter one was absolutely classic xxxHoLic. You nailed the essence of the writing style dead on. I kept saying the entire chapter 'that's exactly what Watanuki would do.' The next two chapters aren't quit as in character, but we did get to see a little of what's going on in their heads. Considering Youko, the purpose of the bracelets could be as simple as being reminders that they're tied to each other and make them think about their relationship. They wouldn't need magic to do that, Watanuki's nature alone would be enough. Doumeki obviously already cares a lot about Watanuki, but Watanuki is too stubborn to give it a chance. I like this. I see it's been sitting for a while, but maybe a little love will encourage some new growth? Muuurrrrrr [pet pet] [HUUUUUUG] [love love]. There, help any? Hehe, hope to see some more from this, there's definitely not enough xxxHoLic to go around. Oh, and if you haven't gotten to see some of the anime yet, I can direct you to a website that has some.
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