| "Family Pet" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: stratataisen [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2006 00:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please continue! I love it to death!
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Reviewed By: lithiumxflower [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2006 12:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh my God! This is great! I loved it. I hope you plan to update soon. You got the characterizations dead on, and it's funny too. I just can't wait to see the Major's reaction when she finds out that they're the two behind the kitten mystery. Great work, and keep it up.
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Reviewed By: laughing woman On: May 28, 2006 13:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great! I really enjoyed it. The characters are on spot and Batou's comment about the Mayor going to eat the kitty alive if she finds it is hilarious! I love the way you write the tachikomas. :D
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Reviewed By: Una Dougal On: May 24, 2006 15:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy crap! This kicks ass! You nailed the characterisations (very 'cannon' I think) and this is hilarious - I can actually picture this happening! I just wish I'd thought of it. Fabulous work, can't wait to read the rest of the story!
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