| "Synthetic Twilight" Reviews/Comments [ 75 ] |
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2007 20:00 CDT
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oh ya oh ya its an update its an update.....its my birthday its my birthday.....well in four more days but ya.....its my birthday....XD....It seemed kinda like a filler.....but I feel so sorry for the horse...*sniff* the poor thing......I hope every thing works out............................Nyuka...........P.S. ....you can update again for my birthday....XD
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Reviewed By: coykoi On: October 26, 2007 23:53 CDT
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Hurray you returned! I almost gave up on this story. Good chapter as always, but....the horse was eaten?! I felt like smacking Inuyasha. What a selfish twat!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2007 20:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im happy you update ^^ i thought you were gone T-T anyways nightmares begin XD
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2007 14:04 CDT
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So glad to see this! Interesting chapter, and I see that IY hasn't lost any of his 'tricks' either. I feel for K, having to deal with the Jewel and all it's mess. Will IY find/figure out what's happening with it?
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Reviewed By: Dragon Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2007 18:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have written a very interesting tale of intrigue. I look forward to seeing how this turns out. Your use of adjectives is consistantly varied through out and allows for a most enjoyable read. Scene changes which I have found most authors to have problems with are smooth and well written. Thank you for an enjoyable read and I look forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2007 03:36 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hahahahahaha finding tabacco on the ship... that would be funny XD and who isnt into their hair XD dont leave us hanging TOO long!! NEED more FLUFF!!! lol :P
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Reviewed By: moussajinx [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2007 01:19 CDT
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The thing though, is how much is this really important to her now. I know she's thinking back on old crush/love but it's also interesting how you've put Inuyasha's feelings into it. Albeit subtlety, but its SO there. I'm enjoying the ruse that she's imune to her own feelings and that she's tried to shut off all the memories from 'before'. Nice work! Good and most excellent work. Now, prove me wrong in my history of updates/reviews and NOT leave this one hanging for weeks on end, Hmm? ;)
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Reviewed By: coykoi On: August 25, 2007 00:20 CDT
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So that's Kagome's plan huh? It sounds pretty good. I mean Inuyasha is already acting like an obedient puppy.
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Title: Laughter is a good thing
Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2007 21:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Speaking of Emilo is he and the crew going to make another operance or where they character to just give Inuyasha something to do after Kagome left? Is that what Kagome is doing playing hard to get because it would truly be terible if she realy didn't want to be with him any more...well I guess she would be dreaming of him if she didn't want to be with him in some part of her mind. I hate the though that Kagome is turning in to a Kikyo it just kinda disturbes me ya know what I mean and the fact that she is talking to voices comeing from the Jewel just reminds me of the ring from "Lord of the Rings".....yes we must have the preshes the preshes...Muhahahahaha...that would be hilarias to have Kagome do that just to freak Inuyasha out...hehe...but I don't think he would get the joke...hehe....well any ways can't wait for the next update....XD............Nyuka
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Reviewed By: Sassa, too lazy to log in On: August 19, 2007 11:37 CDT
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What a teaserchapter!!! But those are good too. It seems the lock-up has gotten Inuyasha to settle a bit at least, but if Kagome continues to act like a wounded fourteen year old brat any longer she's going to be corrupted... and become the one to start battles rather than end them. Now's the time for her to dust off that once ability of hers to accept whatever comes and do the best of it if she wants this to end well... but she doesn't really, does she? Mean. : ) Well, let's go meet the Higurashis!
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Reviewed By: twistedsister On: August 19, 2007 02:42 CDT
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I'm curious as to how short Kagome's hair actually is. Is it similar to how her mother wore it, or is it a bit longer? Also does she still smoke? For some reason I can picture Kagome smoking a pipe.
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Reviewed By: oniguts On: August 19, 2007 00:43 CDT
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Going to see your ancestors, hahaha I wonder if any of them are like her grandfather.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2007 03:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooooooo Inuyasha was caught staring at Kagome hehehehe :P im happy you updated ^^ and ha Inuyasha is getting the silence treatment XD
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Title: WHAT IS LOVE ANY WAYS
Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2007 01:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hay sorry for not reviewing earlyer....I wasn't in the mood to read...for a while any ways....but I have to say I hope that Miroku doesn't let them out because the reason she wants out is because she is tring to avoid confrentagion which is exacly what needs to be confrunted....Inuyasha needs to respesct that she can protect her self and still be by her.....he needs to let her know how he feels about her.....Dang Kikyo died and he is still hung up on her geesss.....the women voice was Midoriko right?? I hope she can some how help fix Kagomes broken heart....or if Inuyasha finds love with her yet again then maybe he can break the dark hold on her heart....I hope in works out....so try to update soon befor I go in to my NOT WANTING TO READ RIGHT NOW mood again...please and Thanyou ....Nyuka
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Reviewed By: coykoi On: August 03, 2007 19:16 CDT
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Inuyasha has a habit of not saying things he wants to say, and saying the things he doesn't mean to. That boy needs to be knocked in the head a couple of times.
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