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| "The Pain of Losing Another" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Title: Love it
Reviewed By: Michelleinugirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2006 05:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
Omg, its a lovly storie, i loved it all! You should wright more though kind of left people on a cliffy. Hahahaha but thats not bad, it gives people ideas, so they can wright stories too, Yup Oh and also i loved the way you put Kagome and Sesshomaru together, creative i gotta say not alot of people do that, yet people dont put Kagura and Sesshomaru together. I mean Rin and Sesshomaru...Thats sicking...Thats like dating my sister...Ewwwww... -laughs- Any ways i loved it you should wright more!
| Reviewed By: emeraldoni1 On: May 25, 2006 19:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
please dont tell me thats the end? pretty please? i really wanted to see kagome get better. i knew it would be too much for her and sessy to get together, but... please dont finidh it there! i loved the story, and suddenly it seemed to just...stop. please continue somehow, even from a different characters view would be good. and maybe a little happiness, a little bit of hope? well, i still loved it... it was a great story, and your a wonderful writer.
| Reviewed By: emeraldoni1 On: May 23, 2006 19:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutly love this series. Please update as much as you can, Icant wait for the next chapter. I wish I knew what was going on, and I cant wait until the family learns about Kagome's son. Kyaaaaaa! Please hurry!!!! Oh, by the way, I have a question (or 2)... 1)Is Sessy, InuYasha, Shippo, etc. demons? Or are they just odd looking humans? 2)Do the females have any of their mad skillz (miko powers, tajiya talent?) 3) Is there anything that has to do with the feudal area in this? I dont think there is, but I have to make sure (Its AU right? Of course ^^) Anyway, just wanted to say I love it so far, and I cant wait for more! ...man! I really cant wait for Sessy and Kagome to have an actual talking meeting! And for Sessy to learn he has a son... and what happened between them? Gah! The impatience is killing me! (by the way, my actual username does not have a 1 in it, but MM.org would not let me post this with out it ^^...stupid thing, it never does... my username is actually 'emeraldoni')
| Title: awww
Reviewed By: mistress_yume [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2006 14:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
aww! that was sad! i'm glad that you brought this story here though =]. update soon!
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