| "Slumber Party!!! Naruto Style" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: I love your story!!! On: July 13, 2007 14:05 CDT
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ausome!!!! keep it up!!!! update soon!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: killing diva On: April 06, 2007 21:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that has got to bethe stupidest chapter ending i have ever read what do you mean she jumps out the window and kills hersel;f then you change it . you should of kept the first one and yuri turned out to be a clone while the real yuir got neji out of sasukes room then madeout with sasuke all night long while tenten somehow was making out with neji anyways keep updating oh an ddont take what i said serously its just my opinion
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Title: nice!
Reviewed By: Amique [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2006 09:51 CST
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the story was great i liked it but that last chap was wierd i dont know...............armmm like what happen when the girls fainted n the boys took them upstairs???????? but overall i loved it hope u update soon sum time this week my bithday is soon sooooooooo yaa
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Reviewed By: Nazozink [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2006 11:57 CST
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One question why did sauske walk in?
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Reviewed By: sask_shino_shika [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2006 19:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really a great story and it's really funny also. Keep at it!!
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Reviewed By: Obitolover On: June 16, 2006 23:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty good story you got here. I would prefer like actual paraghraphs, but this is still good. I was wondering.... does Urusai mean shut up? Or yea? Cuz I have no clue..... (well I have a little clue. It means shut up doesnt it?!?)
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Reviewed By: Sassykitten999 On: June 07, 2006 09:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I can see what the other two mean but I LOVED your story!!!! I liked it a whole lot! I might write some fanfiction stories too but I have to wait for something to pop into my head. I like how you made Sasuke's brother not evil, cause in the Naruto show, I HATE him =D Please finish the story =D
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Reviewed By: jutsu_master12 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2006 19:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i kinda agree with theSKiEisFALLING about the while thoughts and discriptions and the pace but otherwise it's pretty decent. update soon k?
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Title: ...?
Reviewed By: theSKiEisFALLING [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2006 19:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
good story line.. but everyones REALLLY ooc. and its just.... lines... no thoughts and descriptions?! it looks like a script!! its a bit rushed too but like i said the story lines pretty nice ^_^ YAH! you can do it!
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