| "mahado" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: Advice
Reviewed By: YGO Cupid [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2006 23:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
I found this advice for writers in a newspaper and I thought you might like it. 'Writing is easy. All you have to do is stare at a blank piece of paper until drops of blood form on your forehead.'--Gene Fowler. I got more, but this one stands out the most.Keep up the good work!
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Title: Funny
Reviewed By: YGO Cupid [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2006 23:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
The way you make Marik's life misrruble is funny. *laughs* Looks like you don't have a lot of reviews lately. Oh wait, I'm the only one reviewing so far. *phone rings* Hold on. Yello... Hey... I'll have to call ya when that happens, kay?... You will make it in time before they chop me into pieces and send them off to many parts of Egypt?... Okay... Bye. *hangs phone* That was the 'gift' I mentioned about that called. Well, any way... keep up the good work and I'll review it. ^_^
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Title: *wink*
Reviewed By: YGO Cupid [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2006 11:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
You could still give him a good bye present, if you like. And keep going with your fic, kay?
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Title: Good
Reviewed By: YGO Cupid [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2006 19:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's an improvement. But now I noticed in one of the dialouge that it looks like a question but there's no question mark. Try to put in some puctuation marks so readers would know that if its a question or an excamation. And also look over your work to make sure its understandable.
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Title: Needs some work
Reviewed By: YGO Cupid [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2006 16:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's good so far. But it took awhile to figure out what is a dialouge and what is the action and also figure out who's speaking. Try to put in some quote marks next time when it comes to dialouge, okay? But other than that, it's good.
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