Reviewed By:excelsoup [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2006 04:44 CDT Comment/Review: This song fic really went well with yuki's thoughts on things and i REALLY enjoyed reading it!! one thing that i could say through constructive critisism would be that i think that yuki was a bit ooc. i, personaly see him as a bit more sarcastic and negative. even though he IS going through a break through in realizing how muc he cares for shuichi, i believe that he still wouldn't get through an entire thought process with out at least SOME sort of smart-ass-yuki comment. besides that i thought that shis fic was extremely beautiful. i love these lyrics too!
