| "Sasuke's New Found Love for Sakura" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Title: whole story
Reviewed By: raara On: October 04, 2009 06:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
u shuod have let sasuke rape sakura and sakura cuoldnt help but give in.and stop puttin chinese characters
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Reviewed By: x-LlOVe [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2008 02:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol. ooooo!
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Reviewed By: Izaberu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2008 09:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked this chapter more. Love the humour in it. Sasuke's starting to get to know his feelings.
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Title: contentment
Reviewed By: Izaberu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2008 08:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your story! I like how you perceive things. It does sound a bit original (not like in the series) but what the heck. All fanfics are original! You write great! Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: chezaswolf666 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2007 21:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT! I kinda agree with CalvinSims. with the whole thing about chapter 9. Other than that though, great story. my only REAL problem is, that Sasuke has black hair, n u keep sayin, hes a brunette, which confuses the crap outta me. '-_- but I still love the story line keep it up! ^_~
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Reviewed By: AnimeCatGirl080291 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2007 15:27 CST
Comment/Review:
woah...all the other reviews are gone....weird. okay if you want to re-do it fine. i read it before and i will read it again. ^_^ im sure it will still be great
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Title: Re
Reviewed By: CalvinSims On: August 08, 2007 23:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
What the heck happened? You started of so strong with great grammar and descriptive writing. Then all of a sudden on chapter nine, you completely blow it, I could not believe the same person that wrote the first five chapters wrote chapter number nine. It became boring, grammatically messed up, the spelling got messed up, and the story just became completely un-readable. I have not read past chapter number nine, I had to stop and give you some feedback. Maybe the rest will be good, but you just blew it on chapter nine,I hardly want to finish it, but I will because I liked the first 3 chapters so much. Don't waste your talent, I know your capable of better. P.S. I only wrote this because I wanted you to get an idea of were the story fell off. I like the fist three so much. I how my feed-back will help you improve. -goodluck
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Reviewed By: AnimeGoddezz [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2007 02:17 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely LOVED this fanfic. It had my heart fluttering the whole entire way through. I cannot wait for more of the sequel!!
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Reviewed By: copycat_capycot On: February 14, 2007 17:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story could be better, but that's the same for all fanfics. Keep on going!
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