| "Time Is The Enemy of Mortals" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2006 19:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Both are really good. One, short and sweet, the other, way more detailed. But both equally good. Sad, but good.
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Title: BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2006 10:01 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my!!!!! I have no words to describe the feeling!!!!! It's overwhelming... it's romantic... it's tragic... it's terribly sad... and -at the same time- the situation is not so unbelievable. I do imagine Rin marrying no-one and Sesshomaru marrying and not mating to produce an heir. Very sweet and tragic. Congratulations!!! As always you did a great job!!! Mage Delbene
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Title: So sad, but oh so sweet!
Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2006 16:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A classic! B reading U!
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos (nsi) On: May 30, 2006 15:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
okay, i may say inuyasha is a baka, but sesshy brings new meaning to it in this little drabble. but i can totally see him being that way. his hatred for hanyous runs deep and so much of it comes from feeling betrayed by his father. that's a lot of issues to work through for someone who can live thousands of years. rin's life would have seemed so short to work through it all.but at least he always held her in his heart. sesshy was bound by his past and his duties. lovely.
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Reviewed By: Valdimarian [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2006 14:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great little chapter, and I could easily see this one chapter becoming a multy chapter story, or remaining as a stand alone chapter.
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