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| "The Military Transvestite" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: kakashifangirl On: July 07, 2007 19:51 CDT
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ooohhhh.....two new chapters....more torture for the EVIL-FLAMING-GIRLFIREND-STEALING-HOT-SEXYNESS-BASTARD!!! uh....I didn't say any of that out loud....lol....ROY MUSTANG IS DEAD SEXY!!!...in a miniskirt ^^ VIC SAID IT!!! *hides behind a pole* Anywho-ness...Ed should be like an inch taller than Riza and the reason he was promoted so fast and to fuhrer should be becoz of his actions in the series...and he should be like ninteen now, so it explains his height change and promotion time. Like there wasn't a movie-sad-^^ anyway those are my statements and ideas....great story!!!!!!!!!!!!!! =3
| Reviewed By: nihonjin_AEC1990 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2006 18:47 CDT
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Ne.... Ed sould be tall!! Or, at least a no more than a few inches shorter than Mustang, making him about Riza's height. 'Cause tall Ed makes Ed happy. Just wondering, but how old is Edo here? Ed could have been promoted for his actions in the series, and Roy and the others having been demoted for being involved in Pride/Wrath's killing among other things (which wouldn't have been considered treason for some reason...). Since then they could have all been promoted to their previous ranks while/when Ed became Fuhrer. Also, if Amestris could have becom a semi-democracy and elected Ed to Fuhrur-ship due to his fame and the fact that he hadn't stolen anyone's girlfriends. ... Yet...
| Reviewed By: kakashifangirl_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2006 04:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAHA! SERVES THAT BASTARD RIGHT!! Now, they just need to make a "Lost Episdoes Series" with that as the like, 1st episode! Ed being Fuhrer was a nice touch! Write more, PLEASE! FOR ALL THAT IS UN-HOLY AND HILARIOUS! DO IT FOR ME!!!! DO IT FOR ED! whoever you do it for, just do it.
| Reviewed By: notashrimp1 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2006 16:30 CDT
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xD Awesome.... I like Ed's little note. But I was surprised.. How'd Ed get up the ranks so quickly? He totally beat down Mustang, who has had to have been in the military since he was like, 18! That's the only thing I didn't get.
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