| "FAKE in Love: Act XIX, Goodnights and Goodbyes" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: musicalphrase [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2006 18:34 EDT
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Um, so wow.That one hurt a lot. I'm very glad to see this side of Rose. Really, really glad. Looking forward to the next instalment, what a place to leave us off on!
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Reviewed By: Pulse [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2006 16:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I. Love. Being shocked. Jamie's death and Ryo smoking were just two in this act, and all the little ones you insert into the others make my spine tingle. Keep suprising us readers!
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Reviewed By: bluesnake40 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2006 04:01 EDT
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reading this made me think of X-Men the movie ... the parallels in the death of impt characters. I really felt for Rose and can't believe Jamie's dead ... yes, yes, I have to keep reminding myself that they're only fictional characters and not even part of the canon. Anyway, as always, your writing is a joy to read ... more sizzling scenes wldn't have hurt either but I do so enjoy the humour you inject in the chapts. More please!
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Reviewed By: BigD17VBall [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 23:44 EDT
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That was an amazing story. A whole lot of angst, and I bet you are going to be adding more. Thanks for another great story. (poor Rose...)
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Reviewed By: gretel_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 21:50 EDT
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Another very powerful installment. I'm not one of those folks who reads just for lemons (though yours are damn hawt), so it's wonderful to see development and real plot in fanfiction. You do a great job on this series, and I look forward to you continuing. Gotta say, I'm gonna miss Jamie, I really liked Rose happy. But, you have more angst to work with now. Nice work.
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Reviewed By: maylee [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 17:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another wonderful story!! I really enjoyed this one. I thought the drama in this was written really well.Great insight on Rose's character in this story as well. Thank you again for writing and posting your amazing stories of our favorite police men.
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Title: Is O Eirinn Me
Reviewed By: Is O Eirinn Me [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 02:08 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, just wow. Again another amazing story. I loved it, and the angst it fits so well into the story line. Though i was a little upset about Jamie getting killed for two reasons 1) she seemed to be really good for Rose, it was nice to see him happy and 2) im a CSI and well i dont like CSI's blowing up...lol...anyways ill think im going to be done now, oh and i know you just updated but please get another one up soon as possible, im dying to know what happens...lol...Your Fan Is O Eirinn Me
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Reviewed By: SweetRinoa [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 02:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I fell out of my chair when i got the message that you had posted a new story, I was so happy. Once again you have created a wonderful story that is beautifully written. I will continue to wait for what you will create for us next.
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