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"FAKE in Love: Act XIX, Goodnights and Goodbyes" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ]
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 Reviewed By: Insert_Pseudonym [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 16, 2013 14:13 EDT
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Holy cow! I can't believe you killed Jamie! Waaaah! D: And poor Rose, what will become of him now?! Damn you're so evil! ;_; And Alicia is a cold bitch. But then again, whe was never afraid of killing anyone, and I doubt that this has changed after Leo's death. Damn I'm looking forward to the next Act!
 Reviewed By: jdr1184 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 29, 2008 16:09 EDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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I felt so guilty that I was happy Mike was dead instead of someone we know and love. I had a moment of panic that you would be really cruel and kill Drake. Then of course you kill Jamie and I feel bad all over again because better her than my Rose. Poor had it rough in this fic and Dee is on my shit list for thinking Ryo would have sex with Rose just to make him feel better. Bad, Dee, Bad.
 Reviewed By: sternchen  On: September 26, 2006 13:35 EDT
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Wow. I discovered your fake in love stories a two days ago and now I've read all of them... took me quite a while and caused me some headache from being glued to the monitor for hours.. but it was worth it! I really like how you writing! And I love stories that don't make Ryo such a submissive one, and how you're writing the "fights" between Bikky and Dee is absolutely awesome.. I hope there'll be a part 2?? PLEASE!!
 Reviewed By: surrealgreen  On: September 07, 2006 12:38 EDT
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Great job, as always. I love your Fake Fics. They really catch the tone of the characters and the story, and I'm happy to see you're still writing them. I look forward to your next installment!
 Reviewed By: KawaiiYasha [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 22, 2006 14:15 EDT
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a...a....a....ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh dude what going to happen you cant leave me in suspence like this my poor heart cant take it no no no no no *cries* please update soon what will it take I think I have about a nickel and some lent in my wallet it that will help oh wait theres some paper too here take it all just plz update...!!!!! your an awesome writer I bow down in praise to thee *bows and bows again* please have pity on us poor lonesome soul who have nothing better to do then check our e-mail hoping that there an update from you!!!!!! *still bowing* ~*kawaiiyasha*~
 Reviewed By: KawaiiYasha [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 15, 2006 13:55 EDT
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sorry I havent been reviewing in a while its just that I had a slight change of jobs and didnt have access to a pc hehehehe but now I have my onw laptop and am hacking my way onto someone else wireless connection (bad me) and am reading on my merrily (that cant be spelt right) way. I just finish saving your stories on my flash drive and will gladly leave a review for each of them when I finish you so deserve them cus ur a tottaly awesome writter keep it up hehehehehe love luv n more love/luv
 Title: Wish J00 Were Here
Reviewed By: Narri  On: August 14, 2006 01:31 EDT
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*tugs at j00r shirt* Miss Grumpy Demon, ma'am? Puh~leeeeease, come back to us. We miss j00 and j00r supershibby writing, and j00 haven't updated since June. Ja know, we're all on teh edge of our seats to find out what's happening here. Are Dee an' Ryo gonna be okay? (Are Dee an' Ryo gonna be ALIVE...?) And we all want Berkeley to haff a happy ending so bad... ...and Dee STILL hasn't gotten to do Ryo with his glasses on! ;-__-; *snifflesniff* *clings at j00r leg* Plllllrease come back soon, Grumpy Demon! Mediaminer misses j00!
 Reviewed By: ChessyKat [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 24, 2006 15:10 EDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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What a cliffie. Poor Jamie. You had me crying on this one.
 Reviewed By: Xo Shu Mhing [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 20, 2006 15:49 EDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Wow! What a shocker! I never saw Jamies end coming. But great stuff! We all need more!
 Title: .....
Reviewed By: Narri  On: June 19, 2006 17:39 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
*sniff* *sniff* WAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!! *bawls* OMG, SAAAAD!! I mean, I know she was just an OC, and according to Sanami Matoh, Berkeley ends up with Diana (an' Drake with JJ) but...DUDE! I was gettin' attached to her. *sniffle* Maaan...omg. This is story #19 in teh series? Ohhh, PUH~LEEEASE, Grumpy Demon ma'am, don't make this next fic teh last one AND make it have character death/angst!! J00r stories are suuuu awesome and totally addictive, I've been following them since last year, and it is simply a crime to let it end this way! ;-_-; *sniffsniff* I always liked Alicia, too, she was so kewel!!1!one!?!!1!1!11!!. Puh~lease, don' take her "scary, but durn cool" image away for all her fans! And if Berkeley dies, I...*sniffysniffsniff* I almost cried out loud for him when Jamie died, no matter how much I lurve him/Diana. Please, don't ruin his life (albeit fictional)! Mebbe I'm taking this too seriously? ... ...NU!! I lurve FAKE an' I lurve all of teh characters, kerspecially Berkeley, and I lurve this fanfic! Oh, PLEASE, and por favor even, Miss Grumpy Demon, save teh ficcie! Let it have a semi-happy ending! J00r fans implore j00!
 Title: yay
Reviewed By: pilgrim.88  On: June 08, 2006 11:07 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
cliffhanger! nooooooooooooooo. but i'm glad your writers block decided to go so you could write another act! and i don't mind waiting for new acts because i know they'll be brillient every time!!
 Reviewed By: almne  On: June 05, 2006 11:58 EDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow angst and the possibility of a story arc. I can't wait to see what happens next.
 Title: Shocking and Amazing
Reviewed By: BlueSimplicity [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 04, 2006 03:02 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
GD - This has got to be one of the most powerful FAKE stories I have read in a long time. You pulled no punches and left the reader emotionally reeling. That said, it was also one of your most fierce and bravest pieces as a writer. No one likes to see a character die, especially one that your readers have grown so found of. But by having that character die, you took all of us in a new direction. This was definitely a very dark piece, taught with tension, action, and suffering. But it was also full of drama and character development as our usual cast of favourites was pushed in new directions. FABULOUS. Your strength as a writer just keeps growing and growing. Your writing style was taught and sharp, and yet still had your usual flare for dialogue and intimacy. Your imagery and narrative is perfect, and your exposition never overdone. Through your wonderful combination of subtlety and balanced detail, I can always see EXACTLY what it is your trying to describe. And yet, no matter what is happening to our boys, you never lose sight of the fact that they are together, in love, and will get through this with the help of each other. Funny, heartbreaking, sensual, sexy and always intriguing, once again you have blown me away. Of course, it needs ot be said - Keep up the great work,a nd please, WRITE MORE SOON!
 Reviewed By: AvalonKitty101  On: June 03, 2006 21:28 EDT
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Ugh....damn cliffies.... I love this story! But if you don't put up a sequel soon, I'm ripping all my hair out and sending it to you as proof of my insanity. So write again soon!!!
 Title: I guess we all feel the same way...
Reviewed By: shadowjupiter2005 [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 03, 2006 09:32 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Shoot, I almost fell out of bed when I saw you had something new posted! I must admit, I was very anxious to see what new ideas you wanted to express in your new story and floored me a little that you had such a tragedy happen to Rose...and you had to cut it off so bluntly at the end of the story, too! I can't wait to see your "Part II". Right?! Oh, please! And, I agree..it was difficult to see only one intimacy scene between Ryo and Dee because that's where I think you put most of your talent to use. I like how you give Ryo so much more courage to do things with Dee that his character wouldn't normally do in Satomi's world. I can only hope that your next story doesn't take as long to come out...SORRY! I'm so excited to read your stuff!! ^_-
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