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| "FAKE in Love: Act XIX, Goodnights and Goodbyes" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: Xo Shu Mhing [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2006 15:49 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! What a shocker! I never saw Jamies end coming. But great stuff! We all need more!
| Title: .....
Reviewed By: Narri On: June 19, 2006 17:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniff* *sniff* WAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!! *bawls* OMG, SAAAAD!! I mean, I know she was just an OC, and according to Sanami Matoh, Berkeley ends up with Diana (an' Drake with JJ) but...DUDE! I was gettin' attached to her. *sniffle* Maaan...omg. This is story #19 in teh series? Ohhh, PUH~LEEEASE, Grumpy Demon ma'am, don't make this next fic teh last one AND make it have character death/angst!! J00r stories are suuuu awesome and totally addictive, I've been following them since last year, and it is simply a crime to let it end this way! ;-_-; *sniffsniff* I always liked Alicia, too, she was so kewel!!1!one!?!!1!1!11!!. Puh~lease, don' take her "scary, but durn cool" image away for all her fans! And if Berkeley dies, I...*sniffysniffsniff* I almost cried out loud for him when Jamie died, no matter how much I lurve him/Diana. Please, don't ruin his life (albeit fictional)! Mebbe I'm taking this too seriously? ... ...NU!! I lurve FAKE an' I lurve all of teh characters, kerspecially Berkeley, and I lurve this fanfic! Oh, PLEASE, and por favor even, Miss Grumpy Demon, save teh ficcie! Let it have a semi-happy ending! J00r fans implore j00!
| Title: yay
Reviewed By: pilgrim.88 On: June 08, 2006 11:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cliffhanger! nooooooooooooooo. but i'm glad your writers block decided to go so you could write another act! and i don't mind waiting for new acts because i know they'll be brillient every time!!
| Reviewed By: almne On: June 05, 2006 11:58 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow angst and the possibility of a story arc. I can't wait to see what happens next.
| Title: Shocking and Amazing
Reviewed By: BlueSimplicity [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2006 03:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GD - This has got to be one of the most powerful FAKE stories I have read in a long time. You pulled no punches and left the reader emotionally reeling. That said, it was also one of your most fierce and bravest pieces as a writer. No one likes to see a character die, especially one that your readers have grown so found of. But by having that character die, you took all of us in a new direction. This was definitely a very dark piece, taught with tension, action, and suffering. But it was also full of drama and character development as our usual cast of favourites was pushed in new directions. FABULOUS. Your strength as a writer just keeps growing and growing. Your writing style was taught and sharp, and yet still had your usual flare for dialogue and intimacy. Your imagery and narrative is perfect, and your exposition never overdone. Through your wonderful combination of subtlety and balanced detail, I can always see EXACTLY what it is your trying to describe. And yet, no matter what is happening to our boys, you never lose sight of the fact that they are together, in love, and will get through this with the help of each other. Funny, heartbreaking, sensual, sexy and always intriguing, once again you have blown me away. Of course, it needs ot be said - Keep up the great work,a nd please, WRITE MORE SOON!
| Reviewed By: AvalonKitty101 On: June 03, 2006 21:28 EDT
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Ugh....damn cliffies.... I love this story! But if you don't put up a sequel soon, I'm ripping all my hair out and sending it to you as proof of my insanity. So write again soon!!!
| Title: I guess we all feel the same way...
Reviewed By: shadowjupiter2005 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2006 09:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Shoot, I almost fell out of bed when I saw you had something new posted! I must admit, I was very anxious to see what new ideas you wanted to express in your new story and floored me a little that you had such a tragedy happen to Rose...and you had to cut it off so bluntly at the end of the story, too! I can't wait to see your "Part II". Right?! Oh, please! And, I agree..it was difficult to see only one intimacy scene between Ryo and Dee because that's where I think you put most of your talent to use. I like how you give Ryo so much more courage to do things with Dee that his character wouldn't normally do in Satomi's world. I can only hope that your next story doesn't take as long to come out...SORRY! I'm so excited to read your stuff!! ^_-
| Reviewed By: musicalphrase [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2006 18:34 EDT
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Um, so wow.That one hurt a lot. I'm very glad to see this side of Rose. Really, really glad. Looking forward to the next instalment, what a place to leave us off on!
| Reviewed By: Pulse [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2006 16:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I. Love. Being shocked. Jamie's death and Ryo smoking were just two in this act, and all the little ones you insert into the others make my spine tingle. Keep suprising us readers!
| Reviewed By: bluesnake40 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2006 04:01 EDT
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reading this made me think of X-Men the movie ... the parallels in the death of impt characters. I really felt for Rose and can't believe Jamie's dead ... yes, yes, I have to keep reminding myself that they're only fictional characters and not even part of the canon. Anyway, as always, your writing is a joy to read ... more sizzling scenes wldn't have hurt either but I do so enjoy the humour you inject in the chapts. More please!
| Reviewed By: BigD17VBall [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 23:44 EDT
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That was an amazing story. A whole lot of angst, and I bet you are going to be adding more. Thanks for another great story. (poor Rose...)
| Reviewed By: gretel_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 21:50 EDT
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Another very powerful installment. I'm not one of those folks who reads just for lemons (though yours are damn hawt), so it's wonderful to see development and real plot in fanfiction. You do a great job on this series, and I look forward to you continuing. Gotta say, I'm gonna miss Jamie, I really liked Rose happy. But, you have more angst to work with now. Nice work.
| Reviewed By: maylee [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 17:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another wonderful story!! I really enjoyed this one. I thought the drama in this was written really well.Great insight on Rose's character in this story as well. Thank you again for writing and posting your amazing stories of our favorite police men.
| Title: Is O Eirinn Me
Reviewed By: Is O Eirinn Me [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 02:08 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, just wow. Again another amazing story. I loved it, and the angst it fits so well into the story line. Though i was a little upset about Jamie getting killed for two reasons 1) she seemed to be really good for Rose, it was nice to see him happy and 2) im a CSI and well i dont like CSI's blowing up...lol...anyways ill think im going to be done now, oh and i know you just updated but please get another one up soon as possible, im dying to know what happens...lol...Your Fan Is O Eirinn Me
| Reviewed By: SweetRinoa [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 02:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I fell out of my chair when i got the message that you had posted a new story, I was so happy. Once again you have created a wonderful story that is beautifully written. I will continue to wait for what you will create for us next.
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