| "An Estranged Love" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: H_eather On: October 08, 2008 16:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is truly the only fic I've read with this plot line, so good job on being original! I hope you do continue this fic and I look forward to reading future chapters =)
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Reviewed By: jkjk On: December 19, 2007 08:13 CST
Comment/Review:
As you can see I haven't rated your writing. This is because there is no 0 or minus rating displayed as an option. Your story is crap beyond all words. Gohan and Videl love each other and the events that you have delineated simply would not transpire.You are a bitch and a complete cunt-ass and I hope you die a most painful and slow death. You abhorred pile of steaming cow defectation! I simply cannot fathom how you found within your pitiful self, the audacity with which you endeavored to write such mindless garbage. I hope you and your putrid cunt-of-a-mother(for spaing you of course) ROT in hell.
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Reviewed By: Miku_Hinasaki [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2007 21:25 CST
Comment/Review:
Hello. I'm interested in seeing where this is going! I hope I am not too late :( Please continue this.
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