| "Yearning in Darkness" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Aoi Hebi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2007 12:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fascinating. Completely and utterly fascinating. You managed to work so much emotion and story into this little lemon that it pains me to even think about calling it a 'PWP'. Your writing style is so absorbing and deep--uwaaah! I love it! Not to mention I love K, and I love Yohji, so seeing them together in such a well done fic was just absolutely a dream come true. My only complaint is that Yohji was a bit OOC, and reminded me more of Aya than anything, but that could easily be explained away by the earlier events of the evening, so don't worry about it. Overall a wonderful fic! *glomp*
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Reviewed By: AstraeaTrepe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2006 20:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not much of a Gravitation fan, but I LOVE K and I was so excited to see him paired with Yohji. They are such a good match. This fic was hot, and well-written! Such a treat to find. Please e mail me if you have other fics out there somewhere! I gave a seven for originality because Weiss member goes to a club and gets laid is such a Weiss cliche, but this fic is an example of why it's so popular!
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Reviewed By: SWOTBWOT [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2006 18:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very well done! I'm not that familiar with Weiss (I'm essentially a pure Gravi fan), but you managed to make Yohji, and the Weiss setting work for someone who doesn't know either him or it too well, and your version of K was excellent. Many other authors would have fallen flat on their faces trying to write this sort of story, but you pulled it off with style!
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2006 21:45 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
ok i am sooo not a big fan of Gravitation......but this was hot! thank god you're still writing...now I can have hope for some of your other fics being revived....but dang this was hot!
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Title: Perfect!!!
Reviewed By: MangaChild420 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2006 21:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe no one has review for this story yet!! I absolutely love it, I gives a feel of whats going through Yohji's head. I think letting K be dominant was PERFECT!! The fic is pure PREFECTION!! I love please continue to write!!
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