|"Satoshi Revealed" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ]|
| Title: Satoshi Revealed|
Reviewed By: Vampwriter [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2007 00:23 CDT
That was very cute. Sad, but cute. lol, Maybe if you think hard enough you'll be able to come up with something else. A lemon wouldn't be un-appreciated. Next?
| Reviewed By: Tsuki Ishtar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2006 11:33 CDT|
Oh, thanks. ^^ Yeah...this was a quickie. Sorry if it was boring...^^;; I'm still trying to perfect my writing skills. Thanks for reviewing though, I appriciate it.
| Reviewed By: Banov [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2006 08:48 CDT|
Style of Writing: 7 of 10Comment/Review:
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
I'm not much into these, but I read it so I feel obligated to review. Umm... the whole story moves along very quickly, and length may have done this some good since Misty's reactions and the overall romance didn't quite give me the 'complex' feeling you'd expect to get in a story like this. However, everything else was pretty good, I suppose. Good job.