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| "Kyo and... Ritsu?!" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: o.o
Reviewed By: Hihi On: June 24, 2006 11:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
It was a dream I had, I was bored. I didn't mean to make it sound good. I just was bored.
| Reviewed By: PurplePinstripeDevil On: June 24, 2006 02:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sorry, i'm not trying to sound like a bitch, but your story was completely and utterly ghastly! Your writing style was pretty bad and the overall plot of the story was really. . .terrible. (Poor Ritsu. You've defiled him completely) You have a lot of work to do. And for your sake, I hope this was meant to be as horrible as it was.
| Reviewed By: MuhammadGirl On: June 17, 2006 02:45 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Comment/Review:
I'm sorry, I just didn't enjoy this at all.
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