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| "Fly Away in the Morning Glow" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: Sassa [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2007 15:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love these angsty fictions where the author (here:you) refrains from letting INuyasha and Kagome burst out in "I hate you":s and "I love you":s. They wouldn't say things like that. Their personal communication has always been silent, more of gazes, touches and actions. Letting Inuyasha guard Kagome during night, withour even making a slight fuzz about it - that's the perfect way - and also letting Inuyasha be silent to Kikyo's assaults. What could he have said anyway? "No, I don't think the timeline's gonna mess up, I'm quite sure everything's gonna be OK. We've had such good luck so far, with Naraku being a demi-god and all..." Anyway, that's why I love your fic!
| Title: At Least someone wanted her here
Reviewed By: swordedgedwings [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2006 10:51 CDT
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Great job, the story was sweet and kind of sad but still amazing! I loved the ending it was beautiful, poetic. There should be more chapters though! Great job! Keep up the GREAT work!
| Title: HAPPY BIRTHDAY
Reviewed By: Deceptress [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2006 08:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAHAHAHA! This is your birthday present your very own Mediaminer account!!! Hurray!! Hurray!!We posted your oneshot on here, as you will post all your other future one shots as well. Im smiling right now lmao, and I dont smile. I'll tell you how to work this bad boy lol its not too hard to figure out. I LOVE YOU LAUREN! HAPPY BIRTHDAY... DECEPTRESS a,k,a DANI!
| Reviewed By: Ochiko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2006 21:33 CDT
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Awww... That was really cute. I especially liked the line at the end, how even though Kikyo thought she didn't belong there, Inu Yasha showed her that she did through his actions. Good story. ^^
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