| "A Friend From the Past" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: AWSOME!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: 2SEXY4U On: June 30, 2006 10:48 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow u did great!!! keep up the good work ok?! update soon
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Title: I like it, I like it, I like it
Reviewed By: spookagirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2006 00:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
i hope you update really soon this is a cool story....
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Title: interesting
Reviewed By: White Alchemist Taya [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2006 22:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is good but you have to be careful about turning her into a mary-sue. the first chapter was fine because it was introducing her. but the second chapter portrays her as a goody-two shoes who always help everyone in need or something. i mean it is not bad helping people out. but why everybody?? just be carefulo ok. you dont want her to be a mary-sue. update soon!
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