| Reviewed By: QueenToast On: July 03, 2007 09:09 CDT|
Style of Writing: 9 of 10Comment/Review:
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Overall, a good story. As unlikely as this pairing would be in the actual series, the author does a very good job of making the characters her own by adding the romantic flair that makes this piece quite enjoyable. It is a side to Motoko and Batou that many fans would like to see. Thier human side. The author did a paticularly excellent job in animating the character of Batou's basset hound, Gabriel. Gabriel's or Gabu's personality easily shone through the author's descriptive techniques. I could "see" the character clearly in my mind. Again, very good story. I give it a 9 overall.