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| "Not Yet Anyway" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: foxkit [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2007 02:11 CST
Comment/Review:
Not too bad, but I would consider lengthening it. :P Write a paragraph for everything that Shadow does, lol. ^___^ I dunno. That's just what I think.
| Reviewed By: Lucidangel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 21:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
if you think this sucked, then you're CRAZY!! you did a swell job. not only was it believeable, but it was sensual and sexy. it had enough story to it, not just crap-then-get-to-the-humping, like so many other stories i've seen. you really did an awesome job. keep up the good work, and believe that you're doing great too!!!! ^^
| Reviewed By: Watch For Stars* On: June 13, 2006 18:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
Why do you think everything you write sux...? That's just...asking, no begging, for flames! And what the heck's wrong with hentai? lol I think I'm gonna go talk to Will now... *sly grin, wink* lol jkjk Don't wanna creep you out, Amez! Okay, you know I don't like the whole ShadAmy thing, but I liked this! It was good! And Shadow was IC! HOORAH! lol "I don't wanna be a stupid girl...." Sorry, that songs on...lol
| Title: Well well well
Reviewed By: Yamekanur [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2006 00:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
While I did enjoy reading this short 'n' sweet fic, I would like to point out the lack of detail put into each of the three characters. Sure it was enough to get us to know who they were, but it wasnt enough to show us how they truly felt, besides Shadow. The first person thing was pretty cool as well. OH, and btw... if you've been reading either of my stories lately... lets just say that a certain chest-furred hedgehog has made his way across the pages of the mythology.
| Title: great fic
Reviewed By: bromorda On: June 12, 2006 22:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You were so wrong man. this was the best sonic fic i have read in a long time. i gave you a 5 on the creativity because there are so many ShadAmy fics
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